Trouble In the Nursery

They were playing quite nicely,
My pride and my joy;
My two small, blonde daughters
And my redheaded boy.
Then I heard a commotion.
"Oh, what is it now?"
Their friendly, quiet game
Had turned into a row.
Sometimes he teased them
Until they got mad
And ran in to tell me
That Brother was bad.
I could hear them coming
Of the outrage to tell;
Stumbling and crying
Until both of them fell.
They were dressed for a party
In outfits the same.
If they had mussed their dresses
It would be such a shame.
They both talked at once.
I could not make it out
What this unforgivable,
Terrible deed was about.
I called him to ask
"What is it you've done?"
And my high spirited, mischievous,
Lovable son
Stood ready for punishment
As straight as a rod
And admitted he'd called them
"Two Peas In A Pod."

Won first in two peas in a pod contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/10/2009 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest, " Two peas in a pod " I wish you continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 9/9/2009 11:16:00 PM
Joyce, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:47:00 PM
Joyce - Congratulations on winning Nathan’s “Two Peas in a Pod” contest – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/9/2009 1:37:00 PM
This is a very cute poem! I love the story telling and totally believable story to what a lot of parents go through. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 9/9/2009 8:42:00 AM
Surely the perfect choice to be the winner in Nathan's contest!! Great poem!! and a wonderful story. Congratulations, Joyce.
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Date: 9/9/2009 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win in Nathan's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 11:57:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/8/2009 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on !st place. Your poem is a joy to read. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Joyce on placing in Nathan’s” Two Peas in a Pod” poetry contest with this super cute and creative poem. It's easy to see why you won first place. Your creativity shines. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:55:00 PM
LOL most excellent win!!! I can see them now! Light & Love
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Joyce on winning with this delightful poem! Hooray for you! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on 1st place in my contest! Nate.
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:05:00 PM
As the father of twins (boy-girl), I loved this one. Good luck. Vince
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Date: 8/15/2009 12:57:00 AM
So true to life... best wishes with this one Joyce.Thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/14/2009 7:01:00 PM
Delightful poem! Good luck with this in the contest, Joyce! ~ Carrie
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