Trouble

I am in big trouble

My mind is in a muddle

My tears have formed a puddle

My head is in a bubble

My heart feels befuddled

My life has turned to rubble

I desperately need a cuddle

On the double ….!!

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/14/2024 9:13:00 AM

Skillfully rhymed piece that conveys a strong message, Deb. Janice

Deb M
Date: 3/14/2024 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Janice….l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Paul Willason

Date: 3/14/2024 2:43:00 AM

Made my day...just a delightful remedy. Well done, Deb.

Deb M
Date: 3/14/2024 5:05:00 PM

Your comment made my day Paul….thankyou for that! Debx

David Fisher

Date: 3/13/2024 4:56:00 PM

Nice monorhyme, and it's amazing how many -uddle/-ouble words can relate to your Trouble; enjoyed.

Deb M
Date: 3/14/2024 5:04:00 PM

Thanks David….always appreciate your comments…Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 3:04:00 PM

Cute poem, Deb ... here's a E-Cuddle and big hugs from halfway around the world, my friend. ~() ~~ I'm not sure I did that right, but I tried my best. :-) Bill

Deb M
Date: 3/14/2024 5:03:00 PM

I got your e-cuddle Bill….sending one straight back! Debx

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/13/2024 12:06:00 PM

Dear sweet, lovely friend this is so touching. A well written rhyme with a big arrr factor! Bless you. I’m also sending you a big cuddle with lots of smiles lovely Deb xx :):):)

Deb M
Date: 3/14/2024 5:02:00 PM

Thankyou dear Christina…..and a big cuddle coming to you!! Debx