Deb M Poet Rhyme

-Trouble

I am in big trouble

My mind is in a muddle

My tears have formed a puddle

My head is in a bubble

My heart feels befuddled

My life has turned to rubble

I desperately need a cuddle

On the double ….!!

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Janice Canerdy March 14, 2024 at 9:13 AM Skillfully rhymed piece that conveys a strong message, Deb. Janice Deb M March 14, 2024 at 5:05 PM Thanks Janice….l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Paul Willason March 14, 2024 at 2:43 AM Made my day...just a delightful remedy. Well done, Deb. Deb M March 14, 2024 at 5:05 PM Your comment made my day Paul….thankyou for that! Debx

David Fisher March 13, 2024 at 4:56 PM Nice monorhyme, and it's amazing how many -uddle/-ouble words can relate to your Trouble; enjoyed. Deb M March 14, 2024 at 5:04 PM Thanks David….always appreciate your comments…Debx

Bill Baker March 13, 2024 at 3:04 PM Cute poem, Deb ... here's a E-Cuddle and big hugs from halfway around the world, my friend. ~() ~~ I'm not sure I did that right, but I tried my best. :-) Bill Deb M March 14, 2024 at 5:03 PM I got your e-cuddle Bill….sending one straight back! Debx

Christina Bowring March 13, 2024 at 12:06 PM Dear sweet, lovely friend this is so touching. A well written rhyme with a big arrr factor! Bless you. I’m also sending you a big cuddle with lots of smiles lovely Deb xx :):):) Deb M March 14, 2024 at 5:02 PM Thankyou dear Christina…..and a big cuddle coming to you!! Debx

Lin Lane March 13, 2024 at 9:17 AM Hugs and cuddles for you, sweet friend. Deb M March 13, 2024 at 12:01 PM Right back at ya Lovely Lin!!! Debx

Vijay Pandit March 13, 2024 at 6:29 AM When tears form a puddle--a hug is the best cure. Lovely emotive write, Deb. Deb M March 13, 2024 at 12:02 PM Thanks my friend! Debx

David Kavanagh March 13, 2024 at 3:29 AM A virtual hug coming your way Deb, this is really lovely, would look great as a verse on a get well card to yourself, brilliant Cheers David Deb M March 13, 2024 at 12:04 PM I got that hug ….thanks David John!! And thankyou for such a nice comment…much appreciated! Debx

Gershon Wolf March 12, 2024 at 8:10 PM Sweet as sugar -- and no calories to boot. Just love this one, Deb. Thanks, gw Deb M March 13, 2024 at 12:02 PM So happy to hear that BB! Thanyou….Debx