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Tropical Smiles

My Island Girl Sea Sand and Skies Sad Falling Teardrops Bright Tropical Smiles

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Date: 10/6/2018 1:14:00 AM
So evocative with so few words, why I think some of the best poems are short
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Date: 10/29/2017 6:11:00 PM
I'm an Island girl too Arturo - enjoyed your poem short and definitely a sweet ending:-) hugs jan xx
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/29/2017 6:31:00 PM
Lovely you are...Straight to the heart you go... Thanks for passing by my sweet Island girl...
Date: 10/28/2017 12:55:00 AM
Intriguing! From sad, falling teardrops, to bright tropical smiles...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/28/2017 6:56:00 AM
Welcome to life....tears of a happy bride...rain on a sunny day... pineapple, sweet and sour to taste
Date: 10/27/2017 12:38:00 AM
Gosh a few short lines and you have created such a tropical image. Takes that thought "less is more" to a new level. Brilliant Arturo.....Maria
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/27/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Maria... You're an Island girl too...Beautiful as the poem, even more... Thanks again for the uplift...
Date: 10/26/2017 1:43:00 PM
- Lovely written, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/26/2017 1:52:00 PM
Lovely to see you again...Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 10/26/2017 8:50:00 AM
Sweet...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/26/2017 9:46:00 AM
Irie vibes, SO
Date: 10/25/2017 10:24:00 PM
Arturo, your dream came true with this lovely write... it is a magical creation that I enjoyed very much! Have a fabulous evening tonight and a tropical smile kind of day tomorrow my friend! Hugs!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/26/2017 12:39:00 AM
I woke up in the middle of the night to make a change... small but significant. You think I did it...Still feel far away...Thanks to you, my friend... A hug
Date: 10/25/2017 7:49:00 PM
You say so much in so few words Arturo..lovely depiction of tropical smiles!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 10/25/2017 8:21:00 PM
Pleased to meet you, Vijay... and thanks for the uplift... much appreciated... I keep testing the words that are meaningful to me and combining them, in the hope of finding the magic of creation... A dreamer I must be...

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