Triste

she sits alone on the hotel balcony, 
looking out at the city,  
chin on knees, 
arms hugging legs,  
compacting herself into a hush. 

but the stillness hides movements. 

within her eyes water glides slowly in,  
laps her retinas, 
borrows what it finds there, recedes, 
carries it in to sea.  

the quiet water drifts what she sees 
to distant shores washed by indigo tides,   
around lonely atolls,  
into disenchanted lagoons,  
and finally back again,  
returning it, 
sodden with a long-neglected disappointment,  
to the brown eyes,  

along with a tinge of blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:34 AM
very powerful poetry, lovely poem.
Chan Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:50 AM
Thanks a lot, Arthur. Much appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Mesmerizing piece Bernard. Sad and gorgeous. xomo
Chan Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Thank you again, Maureen :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:13 AM
There is a soft, tragic, lull to this poem, that makes her feel berift. Nicely penned, my friend. Great job.
Chan Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 8:40 AM
That was pretty much the effect I was going for. Thank you so much, Caren!
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