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my heated hopes are waxing hazy
    a couple crushed for carnal crazy
      sneaky you, the scheme to hatch
  with her, a perfect itch to scratch

menage a trois Moirai, indeed
    this triple-dip thru natural need
      to savor both at once, supine
  and make that spicy nectar mine

soft sugar tongues mix with my own
    and instantly flesh turns to stone
      such carnal cloisters, meant to be
  two curvy creatures clutched to me

our tangled limbs in pretzel knots
    a percale sea of naughty thoughts
      how can such crazy cookouts be
  to taste you two while tasting me

before I feel compunction's clasp
    to let good virtue close my grasp
      I'll dive this molten madness, US ...
  and drown ... in fiery febrile fuss.

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/26/2019 12:31:00 PM

Hi Gregory: Sneakingly sensual! My compliments!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/26/2019 8:14:00 PM

Thank you very kindly, Ralph, I greatly appreciate it! Clearly not a popular tack, but it was a fun poetic journey nonetheless. Blessings, My Friend! :-)