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Trick Or Treat

Halloween candy
	attacks system with malice~
		orthodontist smiles

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Jennifer Proxenos

October 6, 2020 at 7:52 AM

Very sweet (excuse the pun) Senryu and very clever, orthodontists are laughing all the way to the bank after Halloween night. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 6, 2020 at 7:58 AM

Thanks for stopping by Jennifer. :) Linda

Gershon Wolf

October 4, 2020 at 7:08 PM

Ha, ha! Orthodontist probably look like jack-o-lanterns after Halloween. Cute haiku, Linda! :) gw

Linda Alice Fowler

October 5, 2020 at 5:16 AM

teehee! Thanks gw! laf

Elaine George

October 4, 2020 at 4:26 AM

lol...This is a superb senryu, Linda. ~ Elaine

Linda Alice Fowler

October 4, 2020 at 5:32 AM

Thanks so much Elaine. I appreciate the visit and nice comment. Linda

Kim Rodrigues

October 3, 2020 at 6:57 PM

LOL...we enjoy then the dentist enjoys...cha-ching!

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2020 at 7:15 PM

Ha! Thanks Kim. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2020 at 5:35 PM

ha!! that is a good one.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2020 at 6:24 PM

Thanks Andrea :) Linda

Tom Cunningham

October 3, 2020 at 1:52 PM

Lol, ive never sren a poor dentist, never seen them driving an old banger of a car. Mind you this year may be different as I don't think many kids will be out getting candy. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2020 at 2:18 PM

Ha! I agree Tom. And many retire in their 40s! Yes, the goodies may come from family, not witches and ghosts and goblins (I wonder if they are self-quarantining?). Thanks for the visit and comment. Linda

Jenna Logan

October 3, 2020 at 11:30 AM

oh yeah, they must love that holiday. Good senryu, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2020 at 11:40 AM

Thank you Jenna. They must lobby for the candy companies. Did you ever notice there's a jar with candy in nearly every dentist's office? And they give you samples of toothpaste with sugar in them. Hmmm...I wonder. ;) Linda