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Trick Or Treat

Halloween candy attacks system with malice~ orthodontist smiles

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/6/2020 7:52:00 AM

Very sweet (excuse the pun) Senryu and very clever, orthodontists are laughing all the way to the bank after Halloween night. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/6/2020 7:58:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Jennifer. :) Linda

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/4/2020 7:08:00 PM

Ha, ha! Orthodontist probably look like jack-o-lanterns after Halloween. Cute haiku, Linda! :) gw

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/5/2020 5:16:00 AM

teehee! Thanks gw! laf

Elaine George

Date: 10/4/2020 4:26:00 AM

lol...This is a superb senryu, Linda. ~ Elaine

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/4/2020 5:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Elaine. I appreciate the visit and nice comment. Linda

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2020 6:57:00 PM

LOL...we enjoy then the dentist enjoys...cha-ching!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/3/2020 7:15:00 PM

Ha! Thanks Kim. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2020 5:35:00 PM

ha!! that is a good one.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/3/2020 6:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea :) Linda

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/3/2020 1:52:00 PM

Lol, ive never sren a poor dentist, never seen them driving an old banger of a car. Mind you this year may be different as I don't think many kids will be out getting candy. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/3/2020 2:18:00 PM

Ha! I agree Tom. And many retire in their 40s! Yes, the goodies may come from family, not witches and ghosts and goblins (I wonder if they are self-quarantining?). Thanks for the visit and comment. Linda

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/3/2020 11:30:00 AM

oh yeah, they must love that holiday. Good senryu, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/3/2020 11:40:00 AM

Thank you Jenna. They must lobby for the candy companies. Did you ever notice there's a jar with candy in nearly every dentist's office? And they give you samples of toothpaste with sugar in them. Hmmm...I wonder. ;) Linda

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/3/2020 11:17:00 AM

...all the way to the bank! Another DDS holiday! Aloha! Rico

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/3/2020 11:37:00 AM

Thanks for the stop-by Rico! Aloha :) Linda