Tribute To Native Americans

There was a mystical anticipation in
Running Wolf’s embracing forest tonight.
A heart-felt feeling that encompassed the tents,
The bonfires, and the family. The children had felt it at first light.

Mother Air was fog-like thick, Father Mountain colder than usual.
Brother Trees darkened themselves in a strange way, 
Auntie Twilight helped Spirit Sisters enter the trees,
Rocks, and moss, on this particular day.

Day Spirit slept while Night Spirit took over.
Brother Sky smiled and twinkled in happy glee,
As well-kept secrets of the evening were hurled,
And Cousin Squirrels began the climb up their tree.

Running Wolf’s tribe family did not know it at the time, but
Some said to the Great Spirit later, there was no fright.
None were surprised when they discovered themselves
In the Other World greeting their ancestors at first light.

Written 11-16-2018    Contest:  Tribute to Native American Culture
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Congratulations on your win Caren with this intriguing piece! : )
Krutsinger Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate your stopping by and your lovely comments always. Have a wonderful holiday!
Ashley Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Caren, I enjoyed being enthralled by the spirituality and stirring imagery of your beautifully expressive poem. It captured my imagination with its mystical quality. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Susan. Due to your comment, I re-read the poem and I was glad as I had forgotten totally what I had written. I like it much better after you read it.
Raven Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Hi Caren, dropping by with my congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest with this excellent piece. Such a wonderful tribute. Your words bring the images they paint, to life. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
Krutsinger Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Thank you so much; every once in awhile I try for "imagery" and I really have to try hard, as the things I usually notice are only feelings, nothing in my surroundings at all unless there are neon-paintings which I do, and have surrounded myself with. Thank you!
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 12:08 PM
I like the relationship you create among all creatures, even the "brother" trees, Caren. Congratulations on your win in Line's contest. Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
Krutsinger Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Carolyn. I appreciate your stop by. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season; do something relaxing and fun!
Awtry Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 11:02 PM
A mystical, spiritual tale. I like the style and feel of the story. An excellent tribute.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Thank you. I have a 9-year-old spirit guide named Little Bear who likes to be nicknamed Little Wolf. I gave him free reign on this one.
Kiser Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 9:37 AM
I wonder how often DNA results are wrong; my nephew and a cousin both had them done and ended up being 0. I'd like to get it done but, with so many people's DNA tests turning up 0 I have to wonder; should I waste my time and money?
Krutsinger Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Do not even waste it. I think they have 10 standard "results" they send out, and it is probably secretly run by the FBI so they can solve the "cold cases".
Kiser Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 12:15 AM
Beautiful story, beautifully penned; best of luck in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thanks for the comment; I love everything Native American; my dad looks so much like a Native American I figured I was at least 64 percent Native American. Disappointed with DNA results that came out with a 0 percent.
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