Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Tribute To Charmaine Chircop

 If tonight I could paint a moonlight

sprinkle it with endless love and childlike magic

sail away with you across an azure sea 

on a vessel to happiness

If tonight I could close my eyes

dance with you through the chambers of my heart

wrapping you in the endless emotions of my soul

and let all my Pasionata set us free

If tonight, just like the wind

 felt on your moon glowed cheek

through the silent distance

would you remember me

a fresh sweet scent

of last gardenia

on yesterday's linen sheets

a wonderland of happily ever after's

 through fields of daisies

where the river meets the sea

little by little

dare to dream a dream

wonder a bit longer 

lose yourself

where the crimson bleeds it's rose


08/07/2015
Tribute Contest hosted by Silent One

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 10, 2015 at 12:46 AM Lovely tribute to a sweet poetess Tim! Congrats on big win!

Skat A August 8, 2015 at 10:38 PM Tim, Enjoyed the tribute. SKAT Tim Smith August 9, 2015 at 12:46 PM Thanks Skat

Jan Allison August 8, 2015 at 6:06 PM Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 6:12 PM Thanks Jan

Paul Callus August 8, 2015 at 5:22 PM Cleverly done, Tim! A fitting tribute to a most talented (and beautiful) lady! Her Mediterranean muse knows no limits:) #7 // paul Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 6:12 PM Thanks Paul. She writes beautifully

Richard Lamoureux August 8, 2015 at 10:00 AM I like how you emulated her style. She is one of my favorites as well. Congrats Tim. Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 10:03 AM Thank you Richard

Julia Ward August 8, 2015 at 8:09 AM I was interested in your reply to Silent One. I thought the lovely poem seemed effortless, and that would explain it. Julia, with my kind regards. Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 8:12 AM Thank you Julia. Have a lovely evening

Afolabi Muideen August 8, 2015 at 6:38 AM A well written piece, your tribute is lovely and your descriptive flow smoothly, ...........7!.......A.M Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:13 AM Thank you AM....have a great day

Demetrios Trifiatis August 8, 2015 at 4:36 AM IF... my dear friend, Tim, then Charmaine would be the one to inspire all this plethora of extraordinary feelings and images. A well-deserved tribute to one of our ladies with a capital L! Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:12 AM She is so talented, a true lady, has heart and compassion. Puts others before herself and a true servant of God.

Charmaine Chircop August 8, 2015 at 2:22 AM Oh my..Blush..blush....I m amazed and speechless. You've created such a masterpiece from my humble scribbles.. Oh what a beautiful poem you did..I wish you much luck in the contest ..A favourite..Of course : ) and thanks again : ) Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:10 AM You are most welcome sweet eyes. Hugs xx

Eileen Manassian August 7, 2015 at 10:24 PM Beautiful, Tim. It's almost as though Charmaine wrote it herself. You really encapsulated her essence....and that is beautiful. Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:08 AM Thanks Eileen... I was trying for that effect. Glad I was able to achieve that.

Casarah Nance August 7, 2015 at 5:43 PM Wonderfully done, a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady :) Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:02 AM Thank you Cas

Constance La France August 7, 2015 at 5:33 PM Tim, this is a stunning tribute for a beautiful lady and poet and thanks for visiting my alone poem Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:01 AM She is an amazing lady and poet. Thanks for your visit

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 4:43 PM MY goodness, this is VERY beautiful. One of your best, Tim. You were certainly inspired! FAVE Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 7:00 AM She is a very inspirational lady

Jan Allison August 7, 2015 at 4:37 PM Charma will love this Tim a lovely tribute:-)hugs jan xx Tim Smith August 7, 2015 at 4:43 PM Thanks Jan. I'm not sure if this is what he is looking for but I am happy with it.