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Crystal chandeliers adorn spider’s webs at break of dawn - see them scintillate each morn! Triad in 7 beats Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Checked with how many syllables 02~21~17

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:33:00 PM

Scintillate is such a great word for a poem! Congratulations on your win Jan! :-)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/28/2017 8:09:00 AM

love those crystal chandeliers, jan :) congrats on your excellent placement in nette's contest...you know i always say these short forms are your strength - i still recall your daffodil haiku that placed 1st with me!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 1:10:00 PM

Charlotte you boost my spirits and my self confidence so much:-) thank you for all your support I do appreciate your lovely comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 2/27/2017 2:15:00 PM

Congrats on your placement Jan. I knew using chandeliers would get one of the top spots. Very good my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 2:23:00 PM

Thanks Chris I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/26/2017 10:09:00 PM

beautiful :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 2:23:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 6:39:00 PM

AWESOME win, Jan, and deserved!! Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Grant Norwood

Date: 2/26/2017 4:22:00 PM

Fantastic imagery. Love it. Well done

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2017 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Grant I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2017 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 2/26/2017 11:20:00 AM

This is wonderful, Jan. It really captures the mood of the picture. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2017 11:24:00 AM

Many thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 10:05:00 AM

jan, love the word play and content... i like the use of 'chandeliers..' sweet congrats on your high rank and thanks for joining.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2017 11:23:00 AM

WOW thanks for my 2nd Place Nette I am delighted you liked my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/25/2017 2:51:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan! Best of luck...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda I think Nette will have a tough contest to judge I have seen some lovely poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/24/2017 5:02:00 PM

Oh wow really gorgeous. This is definitely a gem. Excellent...a fav.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2017 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Armand I hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2017 12:44:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Jan - This became a "hot" contest .... suddenly closed ... completely :) - Many a beautiful suggestion .... it will be difficult to judge, I believe - Good luck, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 5:31:00 PM

I saw such lovely poems Anne Lise I think Nette will have a hard time judging:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/22/2017 6:28:00 AM

Lovely write Jan... I like the chandeliers

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 12:24:00 PM

Me too Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 6:23:00 AM

Wow, Jan! This is amazing! I never even knew of the contest, a 7:)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 12:25:00 PM

Give it a go Jo but it is filling quickly:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/22/2017 4:41:00 AM

These entries are so varied. I think they speak to our individual uniqueness. I've read many tonight and a handful were absolute beauty in their impact. I have placed yousr in my hand of handfuls. Special, Jan ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 4:45:00 AM

Aww thanks CayCay I have seen some awesome entries Nette will have a tough job judging this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/21/2017 9:18:00 PM

Very pretty imagery...I like the idea of chandeliers!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 5:04:00 AM

Thanks Laura the webs are very beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/21/2017 9:08:00 PM

Just lovely Jan :-) Triad is new to me, but I know I love the pretty imagery of your words. Don't care for spiders but their webs are so intricate, quite amazing Terrific writing :-) My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 5:05:00 AM

I agree with you Lynn the webs are stunning but i don't like ////00\\\\ my son called them 'doiders' when he was little and we still use that word lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2017 8:33:00 PM

Love this, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2017 5:06:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/21/2017 5:32:00 PM

I have no idea what a triad is but I love the imagery in this poem, Jan:) Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 5:43:00 PM

Nor me Daniel but I loved the pic Nette found for us, I've seen some lovely contest entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/21/2017 4:31:00 PM

wow, you have nailed this one, jan! perfect!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thanks Ilene I think Nette will have a hard time judging this one I have seen some wonderful entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 2/21/2017 4:17:00 PM

Excellent, Jan. Crystal chandeliers is just right. Good luck in the contest. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Barry:-) I don't like spiders but their webs are so beautiful with the dew clinging to it:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2017 3:41:00 PM

GREAT one, Jan. I can see this contest will fill up VERY fast!!! And now i am off here. See ya later from my home!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 3:47:00 PM

Thanks Andrea hope you have time to write one before the contest fills:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 2/21/2017 3:11:00 PM

This is lovely Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Tim I hope Nette likes it I've seen some stunning poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/21/2017 2:37:00 PM

Gorgeous! 7 :) xomo

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 3:07:00 PM

Thanks Maureen:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 2/21/2017 2:30:00 PM

Oh Yeah, Jan, "Chandeliers" loved that and the entire poem. Wow...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2017 3:07:00 PM

Thanks Chris I hope Nette likes it - i have seen some wonderful entries:-) hugs Jan xx