Triad In 7 Beats

Dew as tears in spider thread Silkens as silk green....web bead, Hiding the spider ahead. 2-21-2017

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Lyva Marty

Date: 2/26/2017 10:10:00 PM

So captivating! I read this days back and knew it would win! Except for the word "bead" which might not rhyme with the rest, your verse is outstanding! One of my faves. http://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/pronunciation/english/bead

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/27/2017 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Lyva

Chris Green

Date: 2/22/2017 7:27:00 AM

Very beautiful Nayda. Good luck in the contest my friend.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/22/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Chris.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 7:23:00 AM

"Web bead" - love that, Nayda:)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/22/2017 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Jo.

Doug Vinson

Date: 2/21/2017 11:20:00 PM

In before others! : ) Cheers, Nayda. Beauty and gravitas combined.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/21/2017 11:29:00 PM

Thank you Doug.