Triad In 7 Beats

Dew as tears in spider thread
                                     Silkens as silk green....web bead,
                                            Hiding the spider ahead.















2-21-2017
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Marty Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 10:10 PM
So captivating! I read this days back and knew it would win! Except for the word "bead" which might not rhyme with the rest, your verse is outstanding! One of my faves. http://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/pronunciation/english/bead
Negron Flores Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Lyva
Green Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Very beautiful Nayda. Good luck in the contest my friend.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Chris.
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:23 AM
"Web bead" - love that, Nayda:)
Negron Flores Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Thank you Jo.
Vinson Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 11:20 PM
In before others! : ) Cheers, Nayda. Beauty and gravitas combined.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 11:29 PM
Thank you Doug.
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