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TRIAD IN 7 BEATS-Necklace clear wet web of bubbling dreams beads of beauty rarely seen necklace for a fairy queen TRIAD IN 7 BEATS Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:29:00 PM

Nice flow and imagery! Congratulations Janis! :-)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/14/2017 1:29:00 PM

Thank your sincerely, Mark.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/28/2017 7:10:00 AM

your words paint a pretty image, with great rhythm and flow which isn't always easy in a short syllabic form - congrats on your win!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/28/2017 12:54:00 PM

I really appreciate your comments. Blessings to you Charlotte. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 6:41:00 PM

so glad to see this one again highly placed. Congrats, Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/26/2017 10:29:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Grant Norwood

Date: 2/26/2017 4:29:00 PM

Reads so beautifully. Flows perfectly. Congrats

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/26/2017 10:31:00 PM

Thanks so much for stopping by. Nice to meet you. Blessings, Janis.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 4:00:00 PM

Many congrats Janis I really loved this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/26/2017 10:31:00 PM

Thanks Jan. Nette can come up with some real interesting prompts.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/26/2017 10:32:00 PM

Thanks, Agnes.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 10:16:00 AM

incredible use of diction, janis, with a creative ending.. huge cheers on your win and thanks for joining..huggs

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/26/2017 10:33:00 PM

Come up with something else. You have great contests. Thanks for my placement.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2017 7:49:00 PM

a real cute one. I too thought of necklace! WEll done, Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/26/2017 10:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Sorry I missed you before the contest results.

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/22/2017 8:19:00 AM

In your poem what a sheen ... To read is a joy exceeding ...

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/22/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thanks Probir, I appreciate the comments.

Peter Dome

Date: 2/22/2017 7:47:00 AM

Wonderful visual excllent clever write. Well done. Pete.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/22/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by.

Chris Green

Date: 2/22/2017 7:36:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous Janis. I love the picture it creates in my mind, a necklace for the fairy queen...so enchanting and whimsical. Good luck.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/22/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Chris. Blessings.