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Trembles and Thrills

there was a young girl from Surrey
whose love life was all of a hurry
so went for sex advice
from a madam of vice
now can tease and tempt without worry

she has learnt the art of foreplay
hope he has the libido to stay
her tweaking and kisses
sure has no misses
has a smile on his face all day

his friends ask was it more than a kiss
said he can't disclose what it is
that has made his day
in a wonderful way
said his trembles and thrills were just bliss


penned Nov 3 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/20/2015 12:47:00 AM
Seren, awesome win. Linda
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:09:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:51:00 AM
oo,err, I say, what a romp! Yet another Limerick in the mix, great stuff. Love it, Seren. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:31:00 AM
Serene, *** A mellow naughty green sassy and sultry, TREMBLE and THRILLS and it made us smile, whew! Congratulations! Thank you for participating!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/4/2015 11:48:00 AM
Bravo... When I saw this contest I just went blank... This was absolutely GREAT!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/4/2015 11:51:00 PM
Hi Carol was a fun poem to write!,hope it doesn't offend....Seren
Date: 11/3/2015 5:09:00 PM
Ooh-la-la! That is one sexy write! Best wishes in the contest, Seren! Love, Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/4/2015 11:50:00 PM
Haha Kim wasn't sure if it would do! Thx for commenting.....Seren

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