Trek To Nowhere

Cold breeze whipping against my face,
blurred vision of distant moving trees,
roaring drums pounding inside the ears,
bumps and screeches beneath my feet.

Inviting clear skies of china blue,
splurging clouds, gigantic in rows,
resting birds on telephone lines,
a fast escape from society’s bond.

Winding roads flowing up and down,
huge billboards, the face of a clown,
long stretches of dirt and stones,
a dazzling display of incompetence.

Majestic parade of crumbling nipa huts,
country of slaves exploited for long,
naked old men toiling for the land,
none at stake but their tired souls.

City lights flickering from below,
roaming whores hunting for preys,
sounds of sirens, loud and clear,
another heinous crime of man.

Men of hate filled with indifference,
possessed by ghosts, hired by a devil,
cruel leadership of brutes among men,
tears are falling out of pain.

Society with all its cares and woes,
uncertain what tomorrow brings anew,
neglected past of times unknown,
no lesson has been learned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:38 PM
Wilfredo, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Great writing here, Fred and now its a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest !
George   Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 7:48 PM
Such a vivid picture you have painted of mans' struggle in life - I too hope that one day we will learn lifes' lessons. Good luck, my dear Wilfredo. Lainie
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 5:05 PM
So happy to see two of your poems have made the semi-finals, Fred!! Good luck! ~ Carrie
Buys Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations on going through to the next round. Very well done and best wishes for the finals. Love Heidie
Esquire Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Trek To Nowh ere" being featured this weak Cold Depressing and Dark well written though...HG
Winter Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 11:39 AM
This seems too depressing for me right now but YOU are NOT! Congratulations my dear Dorito on your awesome poetry being featured this week! Hugs, Shar
Fawcett Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 12:14 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Nigel
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 7:46 PM
As long as their is greed and hatred, no lesson ever will be learned, Congrats Fred on "Trek To Nowhere" being featured. Vince
George   Avatar
December 8, 2008 at 10:13 AM
My dear Wilfredo, very heartwrenching truths you have potrayed with vivid images. Will mankind ever learn? It is what I pray for. Thank you for sharing this powerful poem. Love, Lainie
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 3:25 PM
So well written, and ends on a heavy note, but very insightful and thought provoking. Congratulations on this one being featured this week! Well done!~ Carrie
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December 7, 2008 at 2:17 PM
This is a powerful poem with vivid imagery to forward your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
Cailo Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 4:48 PM
.....sigh..... I could very well visualize the contents in here, Sir... Teri
Winter Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 10:06 AM
It started out with beautiful crisp and clear imagery, then it seemed as though you (or the driver) took a wrong turn. Ended up on bad memory lane, a place where vicious cycles run rampant. History does repeat itself in many bad ways. I still hope somehow we have at least made baby steps, that will grow into bigger steps to change things for the better. That is my turning your poem around to optimism. : ) Thought provoking and well written. In fact I will say excellent. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 6:36 AM
Wilfredo - So much truth in this poem - The evil ways of man just flood the cities - I left all of that behind and my wife and I moved back to the small town she grew up in and we live on the very edge of it - I feel blessed to be here - God Bless you
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