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Trek To Nowhere

Cold breeze whipping against my face, blurred vision of distant moving trees, roaring drums pounding inside the ears, bumps and screeches beneath my feet. Inviting clear skies of china blue, splurging clouds, gigantic in rows, resting birds on telephone lines, a fast escape from society’s bond. Winding roads flowing up and down, huge billboards, the face of a clown, long stretches of dirt and stones, a dazzling display of incompetence. Majestic parade of crumbling nipa huts, country of slaves exploited for long, naked old men toiling for the land, none at stake but their tired souls. City lights flickering from below, roaming whores hunting for preys, sounds of sirens, loud and clear, another heinous crime of man. Men of hate filled with indifference, possessed by ghosts, hired by a devil, cruel leadership of brutes among men, tears are falling out of pain. Society with all its cares and woes, uncertain what tomorrow brings anew, neglected past of times unknown, no lesson has been learned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 1:38:00 PM
Wilfredo, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:02:00 PM
Great writing here, Fred and now its a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest !
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Date: 4/1/2009 7:48:00 PM
Such a vivid picture you have painted of mans' struggle in life - I too hope that one day we will learn lifes' lessons. Good luck, my dear Wilfredo. Lainie
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:05:00 PM
So happy to see two of your poems have made the semi-finals, Fred!! Good luck! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on going through to the next round. Very well done and best wishes for the finals. Love Heidie
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Date: 12/10/2008 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Trek To Nowh ere" being featured this weak Cold Depressing and Dark well written though...HG
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Date: 12/9/2008 11:39:00 AM
This seems too depressing for me right now but YOU are NOT! Congratulations my dear Dorito on your awesome poetry being featured this week! Hugs, Shar
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Date: 12/9/2008 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Nigel
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Date: 12/8/2008 7:46:00 PM
As long as their is greed and hatred, no lesson ever will be learned, Congrats Fred on "Trek To Nowhere" being featured. Vince
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Date: 12/8/2008 10:13:00 AM
My dear Wilfredo, very heartwrenching truths you have potrayed with vivid images. Will mankind ever learn? It is what I pray for. Thank you for sharing this powerful poem. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:25:00 PM
So well written, and ends on a heavy note, but very insightful and thought provoking. Congratulations on this one being featured this week! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 12/7/2008 2:17:00 PM
This is a powerful poem with vivid imagery to forward your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 9/16/2008 4:48:00 PM
.....sigh..... I could very well visualize the contents in here, Sir... Teri
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Date: 9/16/2008 10:06:00 AM
It started out with beautiful crisp and clear imagery, then it seemed as though you (or the driver) took a wrong turn. Ended up on bad memory lane, a place where vicious cycles run rampant. History does repeat itself in many bad ways. I still hope somehow we have at least made baby steps, that will grow into bigger steps to change things for the better. That is my turning your poem around to optimism. : ) Thought provoking and well written. In fact I will say excellent. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/16/2008 6:36:00 AM
Wilfredo - So much truth in this poem - The evil ways of man just flood the cities - I left all of that behind and my wife and I moved back to the small town she grew up in and we live on the very edge of it - I feel blessed to be here - God Bless you
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