Trees Dance At Dawn

nascent sun ambles paved catwalk sequin silhouettes wake 2/15/2022 Haiku verse not 575

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2022 10:43:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Eve! The birth of a new day provides inspiration. ~ hugs // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/16/2022 1:50:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Eve. Peaceful :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/15/2022 3:42:00 PM

Your last line Eve is fascinating Hugs, Pangie

Eve Roper
Date: 2/15/2022 5:03:00 PM

Thank you, Panagiota, yes, sun glitters against the leaves. Hope you had a great Valentine's Day

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 1:28:00 PM

Quite beautifully penned imagery.

Eve Roper
Date: 2/15/2022 2:33:00 PM

M. L. Thank you very much. I hope you had a wonderful Valentine’s Day blessing my friend

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/15/2022 12:18:00 PM

Hello Eve, a beautiful sunset. Slowly setting. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/16/2022 11:20:00 AM

Hello Eve, yes I had a nice Valentine's day. Thank you. Hugs.

Eve Roper
Date: 2/15/2022 2:33:00 PM

Thank you, DarleneI hope you had a nice Valentine’s Day.

Silent One

Date: 2/15/2022 11:58:00 AM

The imagery in this is vivid as always.. Great haiku..

Eve Roper
Date: 2/15/2022 2:32:00 PM

Thank you, my friend <3