Trees

The forest has trees A large assortment of trees Some stand tall dying

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/9/2017 8:17:00 PM

A little more meat and potatoes needed, please.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2018 11:39:00 AM

Hello Ronald, okay you will have more meat and potatoes. Have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 8/2/2017 10:18:00 AM

Too bad about the dying trees.Nature has to make room for new ones.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 2:32:00 PM

Yes you are right nature must room for the new ones. Have a nice day my friend.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/30/2017 1:00:00 AM

and some stand crying, loved this!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2017 11:37:00 AM

Hello Arthur, yes some stand crying because they hae no leaves. They haeno leaves because they are dead trees standing up. Have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/25/2017 2:17:00 PM

Correct in form Darlene, well done...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2017 2:34:00 PM

I just ask you to guide me when I go wrong, thank you.My friend Have a nice day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/25/2017 6:24:00 PM

Thank you Charlie I will be writing more haiku as well. Have a good evening my friend.