Tree Rape

Scarlet and golden etched,
autumn leaves reflect summer's apprehended glory
incised in deep veined images.
Released, they sigh earthward like final breaths.

Sharp pungence ripens , musty tang,
a piquant vaporous mustard milked
from forest loam's black breasts
beneath life's heavy kneading tread.

Sudden, determined winds attack
raping writhed skeletal remains;
stripped spring's green clad darlings.
Feigning innocence,
the gray storm fiend curtains guilt
beneath pure, snow white overlay.

Copyright, August 2, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/13/2014 1:55:00 AM
Wow.... Speechless. This is beautiful.
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:06:00 PM
Wow! awesome job Faye, well penned. Esp liked the last stanza... "Feigning innocence, the gray storm fiend curtains guilt beneath pure, snow white overlay." - Brilliant!
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:29:00 PM
You know how much I love this one. BIG congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 8/8/2014 5:19:00 PM
Okay my friend, I read 'Thy Rose' and it was beautifully done but now you're doing this kind of work? Astounding! Your poetry is growing by leaps and bounds you know that? Congrats again and I gotta feeling there are many more to come...
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 8/8/2014 5:22:00 PM
And in case you don't know it already, you are fast becoming one of the top poets on the Soup! - Tim
Date: 8/8/2014 1:09:00 PM
Back wid huge congrats on this winning awesome write Faye!
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:44:00 PM
Well done. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:56:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem of Nature. I enjoyed reading this afternoon. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:58:00 PM
Faye, huge congratulations for your great well-deserved TOP win! Awesome imagery - just a beautiful write! Warmest regards! Pandita
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:56:00 PM
Stopping back with congrats...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/7/2014 10:16:00 AM
Descriptions are amazing... "vaporous mustard milked" for example.....how unique you are as a writer !! Well deserved win!
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Date: 8/7/2014 9:32:00 AM
Fantastic imagery. congrats on the win, Faye
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:52:00 AM
"the gray storm fiend curtains guilt" love it, what a picture. congrats.
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:50:00 AM
Faye, the imagery's breathtaking... lovely win...pd
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:04:00 AM
faye, this is another beautiful write from you, and I suspected it was yours as soon as I read it because it is so reminiscent of the other one; fantastic imagery, and I love that line "...they sigh earthward like final breaths" you've really taken to heart all that I said in my blog and you're just flying with it! congrats on your top win in my contest :)
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Date: 8/2/2014 10:23:00 PM
FAntastic!! I came looking for the turtle poem and saw this one. Now I will continue my turtle search. Faye, you have become one of my very favorite poets and your remind me a bit of Sandra Adams, a good friend of mine here who has not written in a while, so she has not been around since you started coming here. check her out. She is awesome with her free verse.
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Date: 8/2/2014 9:28:00 PM
very visual, Faye. Beautiful!
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Date: 8/2/2014 10:28:00 AM
This is wonderful Faye...Great imagery and I love how you used al splash of alliteration with the first word of each stanza..brilliant...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:38:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Faye ! Speaks of the amazing brush u hv,, well painted my friend !
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Date: 8/2/2014 7:04:00 AM
Great Poem Faye, This is where I come and learn to write poetry and improve my vocabulary, Thanks Faye
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Faye Gibson
Date: 8/2/2014 7:09:00 AM
Haha Jerry...you are hilarious.
Date: 8/2/2014 6:22:00 AM
Such incredible imagery I can picture the scene in my mind and i feel chilled with the biting winds swirling round. Very clever the way you liken the tree to being raped being stripped bare and so vulnerable. Am favouriting this! Hugs Jan xx
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