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Tree of Life - Concrete Cleaved Tanka

- -be- -calm - head-- -not a breath - a trophy------- --------dead - stag--------- --gunshot wounds -  culled for what--- -frogs floating - for pleasure--. -tree- -of life- -still- -growing- --------------------------------

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Date: 10/20/2017 8:57:00 AM
This is very clever..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 10/20/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation, humbled I am.
Date: 10/19/2017 1:20:00 PM
Interesting write! Great images!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 10/20/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Kim, it was so much easier writing it than posting it, can't understand why P. S doesn't allow the use of HTML in the comment boxes?

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