Constance La France Poet Monorhyme

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Tree Memories

 
Each new morning I must, must view my trees,
I love when their branches dance and sway in the breeze;
and how they adapt to season changes with ease.
In October they do a golden leafy striptease;
November and squirrels scamper on a branchy trapeze,
Winter brings the dreaded long deep freeze_
and they look dead with some unknown disease.
Oh, I wish they would put on their green gowns, please;
then, one morn' I wake to a leafy dance like in my memories.

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October 05, 2022


Poetry/Monorhyme/Tree Memories
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1492-446-05
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Premiere contest, Single Stanza Monorhyme
sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 10/06/2022

Sixth Place

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Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2022 at 8:30 AM Awesome poem and win, Constance. My congratulations. Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:53 PM Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, Constance

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 8, 2022 at 11:27 AM A vibrant and lovely poem. Watching the trees through the seasons is a wonderful way to spend time. Congratulations on your win. :) Evelyn Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:54 PM Evelyn, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, Constance

Valsa George October 7, 2022 at 9:17 PM Lovely poem Constance... I too am a lover of trees and plants. You have described the pain of seeing the trees stripped off their leaves in winter and the pleasure of seeing them in their leafy gown in spring. Congratulations on your great win. Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:55 PM Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, Constance

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2022 at 9:22 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest. Way to go. I love how you described the trees of the changing of seasons. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest and comment a little on my poem. Sara Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:56 PM Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment, and compliment, Constance

L Milton Hankins October 7, 2022 at 7:58 AM Loved your monorhyme, Constance. Congratulations on its placement in my contest! Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:56 PM Milt, thank you so much for the inspiration, the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate, Constance

Linda Alice Fowler October 7, 2022 at 7:04 AM Beautiful imagery and rhyming Constance. Congratulations on your win! Linda Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:57 PM Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, Constance

Janice Canerdy October 7, 2022 at 6:18 AM Constance, CONGRATS on your win with this descriptive piece. Janice Constance La France October 9, 2022 at 2:57 PM Janice, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment, Constance

Terry Flood October 7, 2022 at 2:31 AM I think we all love our trees (even those who don’t realise it until someone cuts one down). Directly opposite our drive was a massive old oak. It was leant over by winds of its youth and completely dead on one side but full of life on the other. Last weekend they cut it down. Really miss it. Smashing write, Constance. Congrats. Terry Constance La France October 7, 2022 at 5:23 AM Terry, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats, appreciate, I know exactly what you mean, we had some beautiful ancient Maples, but they had a disease and were cut down, I felt like weeping, Constance

Jenna Logan October 6, 2022 at 9:00 AM I share your feelings about bare trees. Very good rhyming, Constance. Constance La France October 6, 2022 at 3:26 PM Jenna, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, Constance

Vijay Pandit October 6, 2022 at 6:43 AM Much comfort in every glance at nature's beauty and serenity--as you so delightfully convey in this poem, Constance. Constance La France October 6, 2022 at 7:24 AM Vijay, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, Constance

Becky Forbes October 5, 2022 at 7:29 PM So So Good!!! Easy, smooth and fun... Thank you for sharing! Constance La France October 6, 2022 at 7:24 AM Becky, thank you so much for the compliment, Consance

Sotto Poet October 5, 2022 at 6:52 PM Lovely and perfectly written Triolet, great entry for the contest. Best wishes to you. Constance La France October 6, 2022 at 7:25 AM Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, though it is not a Triolet but a Monorhyme poem, Constance