Tree

"this poem is not about what is written, 
but what is not written. . . "


Firmly rooted, I stand in this desert of nothingness
Facing your wrath and warmth with equal willingness

Life around me moves ahead, passes me by
Scorpions, birds and occasionally a butterfly

You gave me all the power to bear fruit, nurture and shade
Yet my entire life passes standing stoically in one place

The wind nudges me, taunts me as it blows
I still stand there unmoved, head shamefully bowed

The leaves that greened with me too flew away
Eloped with the breeze in autumn, left me betrayed

The fruits that I had worked hard to bear
The flowers that graced my wavy hair

With time, these too were snatched away from me,
No reason why I still stand barren and empty.

My bark reverberates with the melancholy of my soul
Waiting for lightning to wield its shining sword.


Afroze  Ali
Contest name: 'The unwritten'
5th July 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 6:16 PM
ali, your poem, Heaven's Grace was so beautiful. I hope you might enter it in my current Faves contest if you can do it in time. Luv, Andra
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July 11, 2011 at 11:56 PM
great Great!! Write!! oh beautiful one of my favs!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:50 PM
Afroze, I am coming back to this one and reading it again while finally seeing all the winners of this contest and I think I must have been tired at the tme I'd read this before because this is really outstanding and deserved an even higher place than it got. (reminds me of a poem of mine on the same theme!) luv, Andrea
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July 8, 2011 at 6:36 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! with the placement...happy for you...*_*junjun
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July 8, 2011 at 12:48 AM
This is truly beautiful and so haunting. This fresh take is one of my favourites because of its rawness and brutal perspective. I could read this a dozen times and focus on a different image each time. Well done! Congrats! Cyndi
George   Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 1:39 PM
AWESEOME!!!!!! Sensational observation of the poto, giving it great death and meaning. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 7:04 AM
Quite the beautiful rhyme Afroze. Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Ali. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 11:33 PM
A beautiful rhyme Afroze. Many congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 9:17 PM
wow this is lovely. So happy to see it won in the contest!
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 2:50 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest, Afroze
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 1:24 PM
… swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, afroze!! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Congrats Afroze on your wonderful win with this dynamic write luv..enjoy ..excellent..
Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:22 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us Ali. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations Ali on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Now this is a different approach to the contest photo.Everyone is writing about that girl.Beautiful personification here....Best wishes....thanks for visiting my poem.
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