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Tree, Roots and the Light

Tree Roots and the Light The tall Tree was Flying, its leaves high in the sky, Trying to go beyond the flying kites, towards the light, Its roots were trying to penetrate the soil, Heading in the deep darkness, it kept moving without a shine. Higher its branches touched the Crown of mirth, Touching the lofty heights of light and the sky, Its leaves and branches were flying and dancing, In the joy of touching Light and those untouched, heights. Some where, not far beyond the skies, lives dearest of our heart and soul, I saw the Tree kept moving towards that One, it always adored, While its beloved roots too, were silently busy in supporting, Without which, the Tree can never even stand to touch the lofty scores. I thought and wondered, which one contributes more, In touching the limitless, lofty heights and the glow of the sky, The stem, which is blessed to touch the sky, or the roots that resembles, A true beloved without which, the stem even can not stand for a while. The Tall tree was standing before me, unfolding its love towards the Sky, With a high and prideful head in the sky, the tree was heading towards the glow, Far away from its beloved roots, to feel the serene touch in the limitless sky, Going a little closer to that Glow, which we adore and love and call Almighty. Ravindra Kanpur India 22 08 2010

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Date: 9/14/2010 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful! Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:51:00 PM
oh, and I see you won for it too! congratulations.
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:50:00 PM
Dear RAvindra, this is one of your best that you have written. So lovely to read, I just really enjoyed it. And profound message! Luv, Andrea ps you should use it as one of your soup contest entries!
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:07:00 AM
I came back to this poem to thank you for your kind comments. Your poetry is so amazing my friend. I really enjoyed this as one of your best pieces. It is in my favorites. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:23:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Ravindra
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:23:00 PM
The outter feeds the inner and vice versa. What a lovely message in this beautiful winning poem. Congratulations Ravindra! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:31:00 PM
Have you heard of the world tree? It's in alot of cultural mythos. I went there once or twice during deep meditation. Congrad's hon on your fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congrats, Ravindra. What an outstanding write. Nice going. Have a great week. Ralph
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations Ravindra on your poetry winning in Paula Swanson's contest "Poetry For Poetry's Sake". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:27:00 PM
how lovely, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:01:00 PM
Congrats Ravindra on your HM in Paula's contest with this rare beauty.. so happy to see your name on the winners list.. enjoyed my friend..with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:21:00 PM
Beautifully written with meaning and imagery, Ravindra. Like your tree, I long to feel "a little closer to that glow." Excellent poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Ravindra
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:51:00 PM
This is eloquent beyond words, dear friend Ravindra. Simply beautiful poetry that sails like that kite! Loved it! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/23/2010 1:06:00 PM
Thanks for the tip on my poem embellish the day....it just makes a crazy long line sometimes...
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:26:00 AM
A nice way to describe the trees, Ravindra. I enjoyed the way you used your imagery to capture the wind making the branches dance. Among other things! I love where your mind took me above & past the trees. Where loved ones reassure their souls are there waiting. Enjoyed,..Poet D.
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Date: 8/22/2010 9:51:00 PM
A wonderful write with explicit deeper meanings revealed by the images you have used. I have been direct on it. Please check my poem Quo Wadis Poetry, a damsel in distress. Ravindra
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Date: 8/22/2010 9:42:00 PM
Elegant and magnificent my friend.. u should enter it in Paula's new contest ... Poetry for Poetry's Sake.. good luck ..its beautiful and thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry tonight.. luv..ciao..
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