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Treat with laughter

Head bald, saffron robe, leaves of old scripture Visited disciples friend, introduced as Face Reader Friend curious to know future Revealed past, (disciple had briefed earlier) Future prediction goofed, prank exposed, had Treat with laughter Placed 7 Members Contest - Halloween Limerick Contest by John Freeman

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Date: 11/29/2010 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations Hitendra on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:41:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations in your well deserved win Hitendra ;-) Adell
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Date: 11/25/2010 12:02:00 PM
congrats on your win Hitendra, and many thanks for all your kind comments
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Date: 11/25/2010 10:00:00 AM
Hitendra, congratulations on your awesome win in the contest ;-) Wilma
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Date: 11/25/2010 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations tO you Hitendra on yur win and thank you very much!
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:35:00 PM
That's what they get for looking in the crystal ball, Hitendra! Great write and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:32:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick my friend.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 3:09:00 PM
Hitendra, Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Hitendra
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:34:00 PM
HI, Hitendra, congrats for your win in the limerick contest. I guess you don't celebrate Thanksgiving, but happy thanksgiving to you anyway! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations Hitendra on your worthy poem's place in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:09:00 AM
Those who try to predict the future often have "disciples" who provide a little background so they sound like they "know something." This happened to me once and the disciple interviewed me before the fortuneteller gave his spin. Very clever entry for John's contest, Hitendra. I think he'll enjoy this one a lot! Wishing you success. Now how about entering my election humor contest? Need three more entries and would love to have your poetry in the mix. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/2/2010 5:07:00 AM
Great use of your words Hitendra to bring home the message to the reader.. laughter is good medicine in Society.. God is tops in Society.. your poetry is exquisite on Soup Society my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:43:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, HItendra. Love that line "treat with laughter." Very clever. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/28/2010 10:04:00 PM
@Carol @Dr Ram @ Carrie @ Francine - thnx for reading this one & commenting on same.... @Dr Ram ... yeah I have followed your guidance. Many thnx for sweet encouraging gesture Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:52:00 PM
I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Hitendra. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2010 2:18:00 PM
SOUP MAIL!!!!
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:13:00 PM
How fun reading this cute poem, Hitendra!!
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Date: 10/28/2010 10:51:00 AM
cute story
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Date: 10/28/2010 9:50:00 AM
Please give once over to the Limerick form, Hitendra. nice . You may refer to Forms of poetry on the left hand side of the page.
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