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Treat With Laughter

Head bald, saffron robe, leaves of old scripture 
Visited disciples friend, introduced as Face Reader
Friend curious to know future
Revealed past, (disciple had briefed earlier)  
Future prediction goofed, prank exposed, had Treat with laughter      



Placed 7 
Members Contest - Halloween Limerick Contest by John Freeman

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 4:49:00 AM

Congratulations Hitendra on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 11/27/2010 8:41:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James

Adell Foster

Date: 11/26/2010 6:12:00 PM

Congratulations in your well deserved win Hitendra ;-) Adell

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/25/2010 12:02:00 PM

congrats on your win Hitendra, and many thanks for all your kind comments

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/25/2010 10:00:00 AM

Hitendra, congratulations on your awesome win in the contest ;-) Wilma

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/25/2010 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations tO you Hitendra on yur win and thank you very much!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2010 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/24/2010 9:35:00 PM

That's what they get for looking in the crystal ball, Hitendra! Great write and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/24/2010 8:32:00 PM

Congrats Hitendra on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick my friend.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/24/2010 3:09:00 PM

Hitendra, Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/24/2010 3:06:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Hitendra

John Freeman

Date: 11/24/2010 2:34:00 PM

Congratulations Hitendra on your worthy poem's place in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2010 2:34:00 PM

HI, Hitendra, congrats for your win in the limerick contest. I guess you don't celebrate Thanksgiving, but happy thanksgiving to you anyway! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/5/2010 7:09:00 AM

Those who try to predict the future often have "disciples" who provide a little background so they sound like they "know something." This happened to me once and the disciple interviewed me before the fortuneteller gave his spin. Very clever entry for John's contest, Hitendra. I think he'll enjoy this one a lot! Wishing you success. Now how about entering my election humor contest? Need three more entries and would love to have your poetry in the mix. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2010 5:07:00 AM

Great use of your words Hitendra to bring home the message to the reader.. laughter is good medicine in Society.. God is tops in Society.. your poetry is exquisite on Soup Society my friend.. enjoyed with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2010 10:43:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, HItendra. Love that line "treat with laughter." Very clever. LUv, Andrea

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/28/2010 10:04:00 PM

@Carol @Dr Ram @ Carrie @ Francine - thnx for reading this one & commenting on same.... @Dr Ram ... yeah I have followed your guidance. Many thnx for sweet encouraging gesture Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2010 3:52:00 PM

I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Hitendra. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/28/2010 2:18:00 PM

SOUP MAIL!!!!