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Treat With Laughter

Head bald, saffron robe, leaves of old scripture 
Visited disciples friend, introduced as Face Reader
Friend curious to know future
Revealed past, (disciple had briefed earlier)  
Future prediction goofed, prank exposed, had Treat with laughter      



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Members Contest - Halloween Limerick Contest by John Freeman

funnyhalloweenlimerick

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 29, 2010 at 4:49 AM

Congratulations Hitendra on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol

James Fraser

November 27, 2010 at 8:41 AM

Many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James

Adell Foster

November 26, 2010 at 6:12 PM

Congratulations in your well deserved win Hitendra ;-) Adell

Francine Roberts

November 25, 2010 at 12:02 PM

congrats on your win Hitendra, and many thanks for all your kind comments

Wilma Neels

November 25, 2010 at 10:00 AM

Hitendra, congratulations on your awesome win in the contest ;-) Wilma

Robert A. Dufresne

November 25, 2010 at 5:04 AM

Congratulations tO you Hitendra on yur win and thank you very much!

Sara Kendrick

November 25, 2010 at 4:17 AM

Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara

Daniel Cwiak

November 24, 2010 at 9:35 PM

That's what they get for looking in the crystal ball, Hitendra! Great write and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 24, 2010 at 8:32 PM

Congrats Hitendra on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick my friend.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

November 24, 2010 at 3:09 PM

Hitendra, Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 24, 2010 at 3:06 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Hitendra

John Freeman

November 24, 2010 at 2:34 PM

Congratulations Hitendra on your worthy poem's place in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

November 24, 2010 at 2:34 PM

HI, Hitendra, congrats for your win in the limerick contest. I guess you don't celebrate Thanksgiving, but happy thanksgiving to you anyway! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

November 5, 2010 at 7:09 AM

Those who try to predict the future often have "disciples" who provide a little background so they sound like they "know something." This happened to me once and the disciple interviewed me before the fortuneteller gave his spin. Very clever entry for John's contest, Hitendra. I think he'll enjoy this one a lot! Wishing you success. Now how about entering my election humor contest? Need three more entries and would love to have your poetry in the mix. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 2, 2010 at 5:07 AM

Great use of your words Hitendra to bring home the message to the reader.. laughter is good medicine in Society.. God is tops in Society.. your poetry is exquisite on Soup Society my friend.. enjoyed with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2010 at 10:43 PM

Good luck in the contest, HItendra. Love that line "treat with laughter." Very clever. LUv, Andrea

Dr Hitendra Mehta

October 28, 2010 at 10:04 PM

@Carol @Dr Ram @ Carrie @ Francine - thnx for reading this one & commenting on same.... @Dr Ram ... yeah I have followed your guidance. Many thnx for sweet encouraging gesture Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta