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Treasures

On the cusp of a stranded daze a chance is born Straddling each strand of a falling raindrop Accompanying its fate a crust soon forms Wavering from solidity to pangs The eyes shut in reverence of a faintly gaze That renders all chances unseen In the dazzling array of sight two tears reverse In the swelling cloud of woe true treasures ply

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Date: 5/17/2019 7:39:00 PM
I always wondered where chances were born, and now I know. You captured me in the first line and never fully let me recover. Nice one Lebo.
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Lebo Bopalamo
Date: 5/18/2019 1:09:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Your comments are highly appreciated.

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