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There are many things in this world in which I treasure, but there are none more than the love for my children that I treasure most. I love them so :)

My children, oh...I love them so So much...more than they might know Know matter their twist or their turn Turn the page...for they will learn Learn my love, for they all have Have held forever in my heart; treasured Treasured forever, dearly...are all my children 49er Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco 10.28.2020

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Jim Dunlap

Date: 12/1/2020 11:00:00 PM

Passionate and poignant. Very evocative and telling of your intrinsic love for your children. Beau travail. ;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/10/2020 6:47:00 AM

An absolute fave for me, I love a parent talking about their love for their children - an absolute treasure Charlie for sure, what we wouldn't do my hubby and I for our two sons whom we adore. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/5/2020 4:57:00 AM

a well-written wreath from a loving father. Kids are a challenge every age, though the challenges change from year to year as they age. This grandmother enjoyed your words.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/2/2020 11:19:00 AM

Sweet Charles. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

John Watt

Date: 11/2/2020 9:41:00 AM

Nice to see your poem make the top 10, Charlie. Our kids are definitely the gifts that keep giving. Congrats ~ John

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/2/2020 6:07:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Charles. Very moving loop poem! Janice

Joanna Feltham

Date: 11/1/2020 11:12:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem. Family are definitely a blessing. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)

Silent One

Date: 10/29/2020 10:52:00 AM

Love it my friend... they can be difficult in teens, but we still love them..

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 10/29/2020 4:51:00 AM

Although a father does not give birth but his love for his children is at times more than a mother. Great write. All the best for contest

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2020 4:49:00 AM

Beautifully done, dear friend. I love this so ... God bless you always

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/29/2020 2:16:00 AM

A beautiful tribute to your children Charlie, they are priceless gifts to us. Hope you're keeping well. Good luck in the contest Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2020 12:54:00 AM

- A beautiful poem from a father's heart, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2020 7:05:00 PM

Ah, dear Charlie, you wear your poetic heart on your sleeve so beautifully. A love for one's children is boundless. Your amazing poem reflects the treasure in your heart. I especially loved; "Turn the page...for they will learn" - so very true and wise words from a loving Dad! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan