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i am no longer lost in the labyrinth of your twisted mentality i kiss the lips of freedom once you drove me insane in the brain now stubborn stains wash away i will never bleed again as i liberate my mind from your shackles of sorrow my suppressed spirit soars watch me fly i collect every shattered shard of hope place them in my heart my faith heals each crack for all the tongues silenced all the hearts broken i fail to hate you i thank you for the lessons pangs of passion refuel a desire to dream as flames rekindle no rain can extinguish yesterday i fell like sunset in a storm today i am a tropical sunrise there is treasure in adversity simple musing silent one 17 November 2019

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Robert Kinard

Date: 2/1/2020 8:27:00 AM

Fantastic is just one of the words I'd use, you are very creative. I will be reading more of your work.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 5:47:00 AM

This is fantastic! Congratulations (late) on POTW. "my faith heals each crack for all the tongues silenced all the hearts broken i fail to hate you" What a wonderful gift you have my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/26/2019 7:56:00 AM

Congratulation SO on POTW...The more Muddy the waters the more Beautiful I grow...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/26/2019 7:25:00 AM

Oh fantastic piece my friend. Congrats on POTW xomo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/24/2019 8:47:00 PM

Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Week. Your thoughts caress the page with such beauty. :) Brandy

Silent One
Date: 11/25/2019 1:47:00 AM

Thank you Brandy..

Maria Williams

Date: 11/24/2019 7:52:00 PM

Back with congratulations on POTW Si, you deserve it....Maria Hugs

Silent One
Date: 11/25/2019 1:48:00 AM

Thank you Maria..

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/24/2019 3:25:00 PM

Both honors today... congratulations your poetry is very deserving, always... hugs

Silent One
Date: 11/24/2019 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Sandy..

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/24/2019 12:04:00 PM

A poem to read over and over! Congratulations to you!

Silent One
Date: 11/24/2019 2:37:00 PM

Thank you..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/24/2019 10:21:00 AM

Congrats too on POTW. Tom

Silent One
Date: 11/24/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank you Tom..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/24/2019 6:45:00 AM

Back with congrats on poem of the week, SO.

Silent One
Date: 11/24/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank you... A bit surprised to be honest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2019 8:23:00 PM

I enjoyed this one and I love that interesting formatting bolding every line between the little verses. Good use of metaphors.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/21/2019 3:56:00 PM

My friend, this is such a truly inspirational and fantastic piece. My two favorites are: i collect every shattered shard of hope place them in my heart my faith heals each crack for all the tongues silenced all the hearts broken i fail to hate you A fav-- and a wondrously creative and beautifully gifted gem.

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 11/21/2019 2:20:00 PM

A standing ovation from me. I like the presentation. And love the empowerment after the storm! ART

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/21/2019 8:30:00 AM

My favorite line: "I fail to hate you." I love the format you chose, with a pattern of bolded lines that rise above the rest. This is uplifting and liberating.

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Juliet, glad you liked it..

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/20/2019 11:10:00 PM

Silent 1, Treasure for all in your powerful write. 'all the hearts broken i fail to hate you'. You won. -Richard

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:35:00 AM

Hate never helps.. thank you Richard..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/20/2019 8:21:00 AM

Very uplifting "musings" conveying wonderful indirect advice to learn from hurts rather than being bitter and vengeful, S.O. Favorite line: "Today . . . sunrise." Janice

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Janice... May we all rise like a tropical sunrise..

Hello There

Date: 11/20/2019 12:17:00 AM

A passion-filled, inspired piece, Silent One. A fave for me..

Hello There
Date: 11/27/2019 9:38:00 PM

All are worthy, my friend, just some I relate to too well and once through is enough if there is pain attached. I hope you will understand...You are on of my favorites.

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:43:00 AM

Thank you.. I do believe this is my first poem you have faved..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/19/2019 11:14:00 PM

"i kiss the lips of freedom, watch me fly" Such a wonderful feeling, floating through clouds of peace. Lingering in awe-inspiring beauty. So many thoughts to ponder here. ~ Brandy

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:43:00 AM

We should all kiss the lips of freedom and fly as high as we can... Thank you Brandy..

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/19/2019 4:50:00 PM

Love the messages within, adversity certainly makes us stronger. Wonderfully written. Hugs

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Cecilia..

Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/19/2019 8:17:00 AM

Very well written . A real phoenix . The agitation , the strength , the liberation. Very good my friend.

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:48:00 AM

Thank you Johnson..

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2019 11:09:00 PM

my mind always welcomes your written words.. a joy to always read... hugs my friend

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:49:00 AM

Thank you..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/18/2019 11:00:00 PM

Wow in unique poetic style you rise above the shackles and troubles and fly like a free bird . This indeed could apply to various suffocating problematic relationships and how you express is awesome and sublime with the weather and bird metaphor that I like to use sometimes as well. Kudos. Best best wishes however and wherever you fly. Will be sending you a poem Mail on the political issue shortly, do chk your mail.

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:52:00 AM

Thank you..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/18/2019 6:44:00 PM

Perfect video to go with the poem. It all works!

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:52:00 AM

Thanks..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/18/2019 6:31:00 PM

You really got creative here, I'm always amazed where your pen takes you , let alone that, "the mind" too. and Yes your always welcome to mia casa for good food.xo

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:54:00 AM

thank you Pixie... even i do not know where my pen will take me..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2019 5:49:00 PM

So much suffering, lost in the labyrinth, insane in the brain but faith and hole heals making a tropical sunrise brighter!

Silent One
Date: 11/21/2019 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Kim..