treasure hiku

d i g g i n g for gold . . . I uncover treasure - poetry gems

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/22/2025 6:37:00 AM

Did Brian like? I do, it's delightful. Love, CayCay

Valsa George

Date: 7/20/2025 4:21:00 AM

Poetry gems can be found only when dug deep. A beautiful haiku, very delightful.

Paige Hind

Date: 7/19/2025 7:27:00 PM

Lovely! Yes! :) <3

Bill Baker

Date: 7/19/2025 7:00:00 PM

I like the shape of your Haiku. Write On! my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2025 5:45:00 PM

Ahh!! I am guessing this one is for a contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sometimes in life there are things so much more important than gold. Sara K

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2025 3:26:00 PM

Delightfully deep.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 7/19/2025 12:59:00 PM

Cute poem! I love digging and looking for treasure :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2025 12:38:00 PM

Yes, they be jewels, trinkets, muse’s gold! Enjoyed!