Treasure Chest 3

I gazed into emerald eyes
And saw the smile of an angel
I admired her treasure chest
Proudly displayed
I told her I was a pirate
And from now on
Her treasure was mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:42 AM
Read all three...was enthralled by all three....Emerald eyes can be enchanting! ;) As for the chest....Seren is on the money...Me thinks thou art being naughty! A man will be a man...Lovely poems...Also, the one of the night is beautiful. You are very talented....
Roberts Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 6:08 PM
hmmmm i am wondering what her treasure chest is you refer to ...Seren
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