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Treacherous Moon

Moon my love and shining knight.
I waited for you last night.
Shivering in anticipation
then desolation.
Lately you did not shine.
Darkness I did not mind
but your rejection was unkind.

Oh treacherous Moon, on whom
were you warming last night?
You even took the stars to entice
and put sparkles in her eyes.
Your splendour I thought was all 
mine, stupid me blind-eyed.
I was never in your designs.

Pierced by insects in the dark
pests of paradise when we part.
Real darkness was in my soul
where confusion had taken hold.
Thoughts tormenting my mind
deceit, lying and worst of all,
the cheating kind.
Nerves stretched to ease the pain
taunting thoughts eased in, like rain.

Moon you promised me wings to fly
even a slice of the sky but you lied.
In the mirror I looked for a reason.
A beauty no longer but a face well 
seasoned.
Stampeding thru life with pieces 
falling apart.
Losing all but the wrinkles and the 
scars.

The mirror never lied twas why,
it never was a companion of mine.
Staring back was a reflection so true
it stunned, turning my grey hair blue.
It was never Moon, it was You.
You were the cheat and the liar,
suppressing all my desires.
Those I loved you pushed them away
You kept me dreaming where the 
palm trees swayed.
Thoughts and actions misconstrued 
I blamed it all, on The Moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/24/2014 8:12:00 AM
This is a jewel my friend.. BBBBBBBRRAVOOOOO!!!!!!
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 7/18/2014 7:12:00 PM
Hi Robert, this is so overdue my dear friend I have been quite busy in the last few weeks that i honestly missed your kind visit. i always appreciate your uplifting comments, thanks so much for dropping by. Alofas, Tiaua
Date: 6/13/2014 8:14:00 PM
Hi Tiaua, this is so beautifully written - love this ode to the Moon! The imagery is incredible - thank you for penning this awesome gem! Warmest regards.
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 6/15/2014 8:16:00 AM
with such comment you can visit me anytime dear Pandita. I love this piece but not many appreciated it until now (with the exception of my dearest friend Demetrios). Again thanks, Alofas Tiaua.
Date: 3/26/2014 7:58:00 AM
Oh pale moon, please look over her and never let fall in despair, for in darkness, she by mistake, may you as the culprit to take! Excellent poem dear Tiaua! Alofas!
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/27/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thanks dearest friend, that's the downside of the tropics, we do suffer from too much moonshine ha!ha!. Your comments as always I look forward to. Lots of alofas. Tiaua.

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