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Travel light, my dear; softly go beyond the night’s each black shadow to another plane. Out of sight exists a realm of such delight you may find relief from sorrow! Lay your head on your pillow. Sink into the Now. Tomorrow comes soon enough, but for tonight travel light! Let the sweet magic start to flow - angel wings sweeping over snow it may seem, or a rainbow bright! Close your eyes, Darling, and take flight! In Dreamland you soon will be, so travel light! Written Jan. 15, 2017 for the Travel LIght Contest of Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 7/22/2017 9:32:00 AM
Hi Andrea, what a rhymically lyrical and beautiful lullaby. The imagery is fabulous :)
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Date: 5/12/2017 11:00:00 PM
I love this lullaby. It would fit perfectly in my novel. Would you consider giving (or selling) permission to use it in a published book? Are you negotiable?
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Date: 2/7/2017 10:22:00 AM
Tremendously beautiful my friend! A fav .. 7
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Date: 1/21/2017 12:28:00 AM
If I could sing, I would sing this lullaby to my family even though every member is grown. It is beautiful and I can easily imagine a Disney magic around a sleepy child dropping in to lullaby induced sleep. So pretty ... CayCay
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Date: 1/17/2017 11:40:00 PM
Great poem and very true the x travel light when going to sleep x we just seem to float away into some distant land x and you captured it well x
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Date: 1/17/2017 5:44:00 PM
Magical. So soothing to read Andrea. A winner for sure.
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Date: 1/17/2017 2:56:00 PM
So tranquil!! Beautiful dear friend.. Especially love the second stanza.. Bol in the contest!
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Date: 1/17/2017 10:31:00 AM
Wow, love the flow of this poem and again if I could write music this would be a great lullaby.
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:57:00 AM
Such a dreamlike quality expressed in this masterful Rondeau. sure to top the winner list, Andrea.
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Date: 1/16/2017 6:40:00 PM
What a sweet, beautiful lullaby, Andrea. A 7! Good luck in the contest. Agnes
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Date: 1/16/2017 2:45:00 PM
- A poem with love so sweet, Andrea - Love it :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2017 1:29:00 PM
Like a mother to a child before the lights turn out..my first thought..good luck dear poet
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Date: 1/16/2017 12:20:00 PM
I love the dreamworld of sleep, another great poem Andrea. You can soup mail me if you want to, I can't figure out how to send soup mail unless I'm soup mailed first and I have a college degree ! Take care and keep writing your wonderful poems !
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Date: 1/16/2017 10:01:00 AM
This was beautiful and read like a whisper. The love in this was definitely felt. Good luck my friend.
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Date: 1/16/2017 8:43:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem Andrea I could picture the snow in the rainbow. It is definitely a fav and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/16/2017 8:38:00 AM
You chose a difficult form...well done
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Date: 1/16/2017 4:34:00 AM
This one is amazing, Andrea:) a 10 and a sure fave:)
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Date: 1/16/2017 2:21:00 AM
You did really great on this entry Andrea. I love the peaceful feeling from your words. I think this will make the winning list. : ) 7
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Date: 1/16/2017 1:05:00 AM
So cute and beautiful...Well done... I love it...Thank you for sharing...A 7...
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Date: 1/16/2017 12:35:00 AM
This is a real lullaby... so beautiful Andrea, I can hear someone sing it for me :) Good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/16/2017 12:12:00 AM
Very enjoyed read dear friend :) Peace, love and respect be with you.
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Date: 1/15/2017 10:39:00 PM
this is beautiful, Andrea <3
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