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Trapped In the Pirate's Lair

Caught up in a world of fog and haze Oblivious, she nurses a ‘left-over high’ A sultry summer’s night; an unending maze Caught up in a world of fog and haze
As she plays marbles on the stoop, in a daze! Barefoot on lush green; wild flower in her hair Caught up in a world of fog and haze A Treasure-bearing vessel, trapped in a pirate’s lair! Caught up in a world of fog and haze As sun rise absorbs the fog and dew The fire in her soul begins to raze Caught up in a world of fog and haze Confused, frightened; family she craves She bolts at the blast from the locomotive’s horn! Heavy fog is dissipating during this phase And she realizes now, a new day has dawn! ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/19/2011 11:20:00 PM
Enjoyed this piece of a poem, Annalise
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:52:00 PM
Dear Annalise, I think I've spent most of my life in this "fog and haze," unable to escape memories of the past. I'm glad you provided a happy ending as I'm trying to move forward and I would like to leave the fog behind. Welcome to the new dawn! Beautifully written, dear. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:49:00 PM
nice dream and very good poetry my dear. excellent thanks for your comments, in the final stages of a Spiritual book and will plugged on a radio station back east where I'm from, it's all in God's time so we will see.anyway God bless you in your endeavors always. Robert
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:07:00 PM
anna!!.. how could you not have entered this dazzling piece..oh, it's great winning piece with such splashes of emotions... this was my contest, lol.. congrats! just love it..now, you hafta join the new one, yes??? :) hugggs
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