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Trap of Least Effort

As she prepared to go out for the evening
She thought she’d make a calculated effort
She couldn’t help but notice how long
It had been since the last time

After a bath she combed her hair and
Found a fancier top to wear
With her freshly washed leggings
She even waved a bit of an old mascara wand
Making a mental note that she’d have to remember
That extra step of removing it before bedtime

She had stopped wearing makeup years ago
Because she could not be bothered
But now suddenly she caught her reflection
In the mirror looking surprisingly good
It dawned on her how long she’d been 
Living her life pretty well in her sweatpants
Following the law of least effort
She’d fallen off to the side of the racetrack
Or maybe she’d parked herself there deliberately
Plain tired of trying to play the game               



AP: 2nd place 2020

Posted on February 9, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/10/2019 5:00:00 PM
That game is often a nightmare; may everyone find a happy niche!
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Date: 2/10/2019 5:39:00 PM
Thanks, ML.
Date: 2/10/2019 3:31:00 PM
What we don't know when young is beauty comes from more than just make up. Beautiful smile, eyes, mind and expression like poetry, singing, painting, dancing and how we treat others. It seems to me you don't need makeup.
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Date: 2/10/2019 4:35:00 PM
LOL thank you so much for your vote of confidence, Timothy. Thanks for your beautiful comment. It would be so important to get that message out to teenagers.
Date: 2/9/2019 6:18:00 PM
the other game being played...one name is 'patience'...another is 'old age' ...i'm constantly tuning my 'reciever' : )
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Date: 2/9/2019 7:13:00 PM
No instruction manuals for these games ever... LOL
Date: 2/9/2019 4:09:00 PM
Ah yes it is a game my friend but on the other hand sometimes it can be fun, I have taken all my mirrors out of my house so now I know I look good, lol well written my friend!
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Date: 2/9/2019 4:55:00 PM
LOL I just stopped looking in them. And I haven't had a cracked mirror in years.

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