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Transmutation

into a warm, welcoming family born a child so blessed now wanders forlorn imbued with divine love's transmutation a lost object of his world's lamentation for a soul so pure no quarter is given to rage and revenge it is often driven in a land of wrath is tempest torn and tossed by the demons are found, by the angels are lost However, such divine emanation never subsides through grace the pure constant spirit abides though despite humanity's harsh vicious roar we shall approach the warm, welcoming shore “we woke up early one morn, ego shorn it felt as though we were in form reborn nodes within stirred, boundaries blurred our head and heart, with love concurred”

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Date: 12/19/2023 12:47:00 PM
I thought this 'Real' and a delicately expressed 'truth' of transmutation wonderfully written. I love the stages of the transformation life gives. Great imagination, Robert!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/13/2024 10:16:00 AM
a deeper essence of my meaning, well understood Anaya, your critique appreciated. Thank you. All my best to you! Robert
Date: 12/10/2023 9:42:00 AM
Deep and insightful poetry, Robert. good entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! A poet friend in Texas, Bill I'm following your poetry now!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/13/2023 8:30:00 AM
I always leave milk and cookies out for Santa, while I hang dradles on the tree! Thank you, for following, I'll try to contribute more often. A Merry Christmas to you and yours, Bill. Cheers, Robert

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