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Written on December 2, 2023

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An Italian sonnet is composed of an octave, rhyming abbaabba, and a sestet, rhyming cdecde or cdcdcd, or in some variant pattern, but with no closing couplet. Italian sonnets can be 11 syllables, as this sonnet is.

 

Years have come and gone, with softly dancing lights, Gesturing with wonders, bravely swirling flames, Changing doubt to faith, remembering Christ’s claims. Reflecting hope, yearning to still the dark nights. Years have transformed my heart, feelings, and insights, Showing me to love, without fear that shames, Giving and forgiving, not playing mind games. Sincerely sharing takes your heart to new heights. Transforming shadows to silhouettes of bliss, Glittering in hearts, like stars in summer skies, Promises of peace that summer’s sky won’t miss, Interpreting dreams who wind’s wrath can’t disguise, Stirring belief in those who know the soul’s kiss, Transmutation brings joy, much like love implies.

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Date: 12/3/2023 8:19:00 PM
Simply excellent. The journey from doubt to faith and from fears to forgiveness and love is a wonderful transmutation. This sonnet is outstanding in its impeccable form and essence. Into my FAVE. All the Best Gina...
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Date: 12/2/2023 2:08:00 PM
Gosh, I don't know if I ever saw you do a sonnet before. You should try them more often. Thanks for creating such a sweet definition for transmutation. I have no clue how to take this challenge!
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