Transient

Sonnet: Transient

Of all my almost-loves and far-too-soons,
Hers brought a heat most akin to summer’s sun.
I ill-assumed, one night in joyful June,
A pair so young may ever-laugh in unison.
That season we peeled the rind of unripe love,
No heed paid the holocaust by autumn,
Till it was warmth we lay in bed bereft of,
When roses dead had warned our winter’d come.
Such loves birth as flood then burn to vapor,
From eyes a pain downpours, torrential rain;
Hence I plan to leave next summer’s savior,
Before lips aflame douse to kiss in vain.
     She’ll think me true and bare me her nude heart,
     As I don armor then from her depart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Jay Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:10 PM
remarkable
Smith Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 4:52 PM
a lovely sonnet poet
Arnone Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Interesting sonnet, with a sad, almost tragic outcome..... :-)
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Oh....there is much depth in this write. My favorite line here is....Such loves birth as flood then burn to vapor. So true. So true. It sometimes is easier to put on the armor than suffer pain. Thanks for the visit to my POTD and welcome to PS. :)
Love Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Thank you! For the welcome especially.
A   Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Interesting read, Georgio...pd
Love Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Appreciate it!
A  Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Georgio, very good... skat
Love Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Thank you, Skat.
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