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Caution: Recommended for gamblers only

Went in bone dry Came out all wet Before my next shower I'm placing a bet

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Date: 8/16/2021 11:54:00 AM
I am no gambler, but it is uniquely its own poem.
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Date: 8/14/2021 7:36:00 PM
Strike while the iron's hot, they say~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2021 7:54:00 PM
Strike One, Two, and Three...
Date: 8/14/2021 1:41:00 AM
For sure; amazing, but when one stops hitting one's self in the head with a hammer, the pain goes away. Well said.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2021 7:52:00 PM
Brilliant comment, Joe. Thanks. Take care, Gershon

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