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Transcendence

My heart will gladly express gratitude for yielding. The day's fulfilments grasp an epilogue wielding. At the point when my eyesight would rest placidly. Distress is being waged elsewhere so abjectly. Through the ambiguity, a sparkle of spirits is seen. A tangle of a precious and scarce moment in sheen, Dreams utterly become a strain whirl as they came. Provide yourself the bestowal to snag first to blame! At the staggering giddiness sequestered edge. Guilt is the comeliness created in camouflage. In a restrained tone, virtually similar to a mumbled way. Who is still on the earth? On the suppleness quay. He is cloaked in its utterly obvious vividness. In other words, a resentful yearning to assess. A regret outline abides an odd incredible sight. Shards of ambiguous stone turn over the blight, On a slender, silky thread, stashed above. A spider spots out for a cursory meal to serve. They mete their lives as not grasping one another. Brief of jolting ascendancy in a peculiar picture, Floating in lushness, short of cutouts, or broker insight. As all worry fades, to propel and fulfill my gist plight. In the loneliness of my spirit, I hunt the looming dawn. All worldliness has been transcended, so it has drawn.
First place contest winner
Written: January 06, 2022 This or That, Vol 9 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh A Strand (1065) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your words are floating like the flowers on the water. A "Beautiful" write and picture. Have a blessed day....................
Kauffman Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 10:13 AM
"Through ambiguity, a sparkle of spirits is seen." Just one of many memorable lines gracing every stanza Lasaad! Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings that transcend "worldliness."
Ibeh Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Outstanding work, Lasaad:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Poet Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thank you so much, Edward; it means a lot to me. And I appreciate your reading placing, and commenting on my poem. My Kindest regards
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:44 PM
"Guilt is the comeliness created in camouflage" - A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 2:29 PM
I see you were very much inspired by This or That contest Best of luck in the contest. I am so busy these days, I have not even had time to look at many of the newer contests yet!!
Ball Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 1:11 PM
This is a very thought provoking and pensive piece causing the reader to muse on the meanings of the things in our lives and what may be going on the the lives of those around us. Often we can be surrounded by beauty yet be blind to it because of turmoil in our own life. Beautifully written and well expressed my friend. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 12:12 PM
- This flows so beautifully with its lively poetic images ... a winning poem in my eyes, Las - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 2:56 AM
Creative lines penned in this one. A night's rest can bring about dreams that fulfill what we missed that day or can be stressed related nightmares at least this was a good dream. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
George Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:41 PM
"At the point when my eyesight would rest placidly. Distress is being waged elsewhere so abjectly." When our eyes meet all that is lovely and when we rise above all worldly encumbrances and float light in joy in ether, we reach a state of transcendence. Great poem with powerful diction Lasaad. Best of luck in the contest, dear friend...
Baker Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Very deep and vivid imagery. Presented in a way that shows your depth of awareness of all that is with you in a moment of experience or observation. Very enjoyable poem to read and ponder, Lasaad. It Should do well in the contest. The flow of your vocabulary is amazing to me. It is so smooth yet a show of your command of the English language. Bless you and the gift of poetry you share with us, Bill
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 1:53 PM
You explore the world of transcendence seeking solace and serenity. Meaningful write, Lasaad.
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