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Tranquility Poetry Contest

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Tranquility

"The tranquility that comes when you stop caring what they say, or think, or do. Only what you do." -Marcus Aurelius

       How calm was the sea with its graceful and serene wavelets.
      A light silent breeze guided my sailing boat.
I maneuvered the vessel toward the landing
Where I tethered the boat fast for tomorrows ride.

Everywhere was enveloped in perfect silence,
As I walked towards the large green plateau.
     I was in no hurry as I approached the willow tree,
    Under which I decided to rest from the noisy metropolis.

Nature provided me with complete tranquility.
Even birds had decided to rest in far off trees.
     I closed my eyes, allowing a happy hush
     That lulled me into a partial steady evening trance.

My poor soul felt an almost divine rest.
             But alas, all good things come to an end.
Clouds had risen and I felt the first drops 
Of mild drizzle.  It was time to go to my own cottage.

My sweet Annabel with her dark honey colored hair,   
Was already brewing a pot of sweet-smelling coffee.      
Her radio echoed a soft delicate song that enhanced my dreams.
        I sipped my coffee, kissed Annabel as she huddled near me on our sofa
                                                                       ……….and dreamt of tranquility.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2026 at 7:03 PM
Back with congrats. This is a super winning poem
Smith  Avatar
October 10, 2026 at 6:42 PM
Back with Congratulations on your contest placement 🌹 👏
Sharma  Avatar
October 10, 2026 at 6:02 AM
Awwn this is the sweetest essence of Tranquility dear Victor, so glad to see you back, writing with such peace and heartfelt depth ~ i felt the calm in your words and the elegance with which you've poured your thoughts here, just mesmerised me. Hope you've been well, and the time away has been healing ~ I can see why this poem is POTD, so well deserved! Heartiest congratulations! A fave ~ keep writinnn n shininnn ☀️ 🍁 💫 🧚
Smith  Avatar
October 9, 2026 at 8:15 PM
More accolades ... Congratulations on 2nd place on the 100 best new poems in the past 2 weeks.👏
Freie Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 9:31 PM
Victor, you write with the ebb and flow that took me back in time. My tranquility was found on a thousand starry nights, prisms of light, lit in my eyes. Rocked in the cradle, a child amongst giants, fearful of none. Because we were one. Thank you for taking me back home. I foresee stars on the rise, scripted light emits from your eyes.
Godwin Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 9:15 PM
I'm so happy you are back. Congrats on POTD with this healthy poem of worth and beauty, like you, right? Finding you on my poem yesterday put a smile on my face and this poem does the same. It is more than touching, it poetically described a special 'otherness' moment that comes along every now and then. Thank you for sharing that. BE HEALTHY, I want you to have a quality day, every day - want it for all people but I'll start with you ... CayCay
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 8:38 PM
Dear Victor, your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace, and my heart is drifting in these beautiful moments. So soft and serene. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 2:12 PM
Hello Victor Buhagiar :-) Congratulations on your POTD! Have a nice day ~ AA
Goldsmith Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful "Tranquility" write again. WOW!!! This week we both got POTD for this "Tranquility" write. Hooray!!!! Have a blessed day with your win...............
Freie Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 9:38 PM
Isn't that such a lovely coincidence? You both took me back in time. Dual thanks!
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 10:02 AM
Victor, back to congratulate you with POTD with your wonderful poem.
Buehler Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 9:15 AM
I am back with delighted congratulations on POTD, Victor. Enjoy your special day. 👏❤️
Special Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 5:56 AM
Extremely moving. Congrats on POTD! -Nobody Special
Smith  Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD 🌹
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 5:22 AM
truly romantic and poignant. Great to see you back, Victor. You were missed. Congrats on your POTD designation. Applause!
George Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 4:24 AM
What a victorious comeback after a small stint of silence. I have fallen in love with your poem, dear Victor. Congratulations on your POTD.
Seeker Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 4:13 AM
The last stanza certifies this poem is penned by Victor-the-romantic! Congratulations on POTD.
Messina Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 2:54 AM
Very nicely done, Victor. Congratulations on POTD! I hope you are feeling well, my friend. Keep the ink flowing!
Poet Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 2:43 AM
Nature offered complete peace, with even the birds resting in distant trees. I closed my eyes, embraced by a soothing quiet that gently lulled me into a peaceful evening trance. Clouds gathered, and a light drizzle began to fall, prompting me to head back to my cottage. Great poem Victor, I hope you're better, dear friend
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 1:50 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor ... enjoy :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 1:36 AM
Back to say congratulations on your potd honor! 🥰
Cunningham Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Back with congratulations to you Victor on todays POTD honour. Welcome back.👍 Tom
Buehler Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 4:46 PM
It is wonderful to be reading your amazing poetry again, dear Victor! How I've missed your tales of perfect days, often filled with romance, in beautiful, natural settings. This is a fave. I will continue to pray that your strength and good health return, more and more each day. Hugs. 😊
Kitchin Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 2:54 PM
Victor, a beautiful poem and ending. Best for the contest. So glad to see you back on PS. -hugs
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Aw, sweet, lovely poem, and it is SO good to see that you are writing again Victor. You have been in my prayers since I had learned about your hospital stay. I do wish that I could be onsite way more often. Your poem is filled with the search for peace and comfort in a busy world, as well as a cozy romantic sweetness of quiet love and home life. I hope you are feeling better and recovering well dear friend.
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 1:03 PM
This was a soothing read indeed. I enjoyed the imagery of you kissing your honey colored haired sweetheart! Thanks for sharing Victor!
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