Sara Kendrick Poet Rubaiyat

Tranquil Hideaway

Tranquil hideaway_ halcyon water
A peaceful place for adopted daughter
His special child, who loves the glistening
On leaves, blooms; thanks accepter

Mountain trail; Spirit accompanying
Pastoral scene my Father listening
His loving hands are so very gentle
Words so loving come, none are abashing

Being at this place not accidental
Total faith in Him; no abandoning
Thanks for harmonious soothing corner
Gentle hands, voice, His Spirit abiding

Interlocking Ruaiyat
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Meera Jyothilekshmi April 27, 2011 at 8:16 PM Dear Sara, congratulations!and thanks for commenting too.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2011 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, sara

Gautami Phookan April 27, 2011 at 9:05 AM Many Congrats Sara on your super win with this wonderful piece on nature's beauty.Love, gautami

John Freeman April 27, 2011 at 8:32 AM Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Sara. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses

Tahera Mannan April 27, 2011 at 3:39 AM This tranquil hideaway is superb Sara. many congrats.

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2011 at 3:58 PM So happy to see your beautiful poem in the winners' circle, Sara. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne April 26, 2011 at 1:26 PM Many congrats on your win, Sara : )

Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2011 at 12:32 PM Congratulations Sara on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 26, 2011 at 12:27 PM Congrats Sara on your 5th place win in John's contest with this perfect poem using the new form so well my friend.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..

James Fraser April 26, 2011 at 12:09 PM Many congratulations on your fifth place win Sara with this lovely poetry (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles

Caryl Muzzey April 26, 2011 at 11:15 AM Congratulations on 5th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl

Elaine George April 26, 2011 at 11:09 AM Beautiful,Sara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

Jslambert Mister Roboto April 24, 2011 at 5:01 AM I love this write! Happy Easter! I have made an Easter Egg Poem for you and my Soup Friends! ~JSLambert

Jslambert Mister Roboto April 24, 2011 at 5:01 AM I love this write! Happy Easter! I have made an Easter Egg Poem for you and my Soup Friends! ~JSLambert

Manouchka Doreus April 18, 2011 at 4:56 PM good luck... i love the ways your words flow

Lynette Chachere April 18, 2011 at 3:07 PM so sweet(: and loving.. i hope you're well, Sara. ~always&forever

Anthony Nutter April 15, 2011 at 6:03 PM beautiful write and excellent contest entry.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 15, 2011 at 5:25 PM Wonderful entry to the contest, Sara

Diane Locksley April 14, 2011 at 12:38 PM This is simply divine Sara. I have never seen this form before and your poem flows so well. Good luck in the contest! Diane

Kash Poet April 14, 2011 at 10:58 AM Wonderful Rubaiyat on the contest photo Sara.Best wishes---kashinath

Daver Austin April 14, 2011 at 10:06 AM Lovely wite. Are you his "special child?" Love, Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown April 14, 2011 at 9:10 AM Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sara. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find even more inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a great day. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2011 at 7:27 AM Enjoy a blessed day Sara.. thankxx for your sweet comment on my Tanka luv..

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2011 at 10:20 PM well, it sure looks to ME like you did a great job with this, Sara. I really liked the little line where you rhymed daughter with water.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 13, 2011 at 8:40 PM More than beautiful Sara and u utilized the Rubaiyat form so well ..good luck in the contest.. I luv this form lots.. your words are expressive with wonderful imagery and total faith in HIM ..no abandoning.. four sure a winner.. good luck my friend...

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