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Tranquil Hideaway

Tranquil hideaway_ halcyon water A peaceful place for adopted daughter His special child, who loves the glistening On leaves, blooms; thanks accepter Mountain trail; Spirit accompanying Pastoral scene my Father listening His loving hands are so very gentle Words so loving come, none are abashing Being at this place not accidental Total faith in Him; no abandoning Thanks for harmonious soothing corner Gentle hands, voice, His Spirit abiding Interlocking Ruaiyat Thanks for the challenge: Contest: Use Rubaiyat Form Sponsor: John Freeman

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Date: 4/27/2011 8:16:00 PM
Dear Sara, congratulations!and thanks for commenting too.
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:05:00 AM
Many Congrats Sara on your super win with this wonderful piece on nature's beauty.Love, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:32:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Sara. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/27/2011 3:39:00 AM
This tranquil hideaway is superb Sara. many congrats.
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:58:00 PM
So happy to see your beautiful poem in the winners' circle, Sara. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Sara : )
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:27:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your 5th place win in John's contest with this perfect poem using the new form so well my friend.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:09:00 PM
Many congratulations on your fifth place win Sara with this lovely poetry (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on 5th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful,Sara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:01:00 AM
I love this write! Happy Easter! I have made an Easter Egg Poem for you and my Soup Friends! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:01:00 AM
I love this write! Happy Easter! I have made an Easter Egg Poem for you and my Soup Friends! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:56:00 PM
good luck... i love the ways your words flow
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:07:00 PM
so sweet(: and loving.. i hope you're well, Sara. ~always&forever
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:03:00 PM
beautiful write and excellent contest entry.
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:25:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, Sara
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Date: 4/14/2011 12:38:00 PM
This is simply divine Sara. I have never seen this form before and your poem flows so well. Good luck in the contest! Diane
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:58:00 AM
Wonderful Rubaiyat on the contest photo Sara.Best wishes---kashinath
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:06:00 AM
Lovely wite. Are you his "special child?" Love, Dave
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sara. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find even more inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a great day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:27:00 AM
Enjoy a blessed day Sara.. thankxx for your sweet comment on my Tanka luv..
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Date: 4/13/2011 10:20:00 PM
well, it sure looks to ME like you did a great job with this, Sara. I really liked the little line where you rhymed daughter with water.
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Date: 4/13/2011 8:40:00 PM
More than beautiful Sara and u utilized the Rubaiyat form so well ..good luck in the contest.. I luv this form lots.. your words are expressive with wonderful imagery and total faith in HIM ..no abandoning.. four sure a winner.. good luck my friend...
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