Trains - Through the Eyes of a Baby Boomer

It was a train
that took my mother west
away from her family farm
to seek adventure. She found work in San Diego,
joined the Navy and met my dad.
It was the 1950’s.
Planes were not yet a big deal
and many traveled long distances
by train.

It was a train 
that carried my mom away
from a husband impossible to live with.
The year was 1960. For traveling far,
the train was the poor man’s choice.
Trains and buses were plentiful
when my mom brought her 4 young girls
back to her parents’ farm
to then start over.

It was a train
that my father purchased two tickets for
so that my sister and I could visit with him
out west where he lived near Seattle.
The year was 1969. 
On a black and white TV, with my dad,
we watched astronauts walking on the moon.
It was a time of social unrest, and technology would soon
be soaring past the moon!

It was a train 
that brought my sister and I home
from the lovely visit with our dad.
I recall having to walk past a troop of flirty boy scouts
that occupied one of the train’s cars
each time my sister and I made our way to the dining car.
We watched mountains turn into cornfields
as the train carried us back toward the Mississippi.
A most memorable experience it was.

It was a train
that brought me only a few other times after that
to visit my dad out west or my mother in Iowa
as I traveled with a spouse and two sometimes-wailing kids.
Like a train, my life kept moving.
After 1984, I’d use the train no more.
Trains had become nostalgic ways to travel -
used more by people with the luxury of time,
people who enjoyed eating meals as
scenery sped past them outside their windows.

It’s the plane
that modern rushed humanity today are using.
Buses are low-class and cars are for road trips.
Trains, though still running, are not much heard of.
It’s not so easy to find
a very accommodating route by train.
My life has flown by like a plane,
but if it should ever slow down,
I think I’d like to take again – a train!

Oct. 27, 2021
For the Railroads, A Historical Glance Back Poetry Contest
Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley
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May Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 6:22 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea, Congrats on yor win
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations, Andrea - a touching story of your family - connected with train-rides. Beautifully described. Love ~ Mala
Agustin Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing another wondrous part of your "traveling life" through this muse of yours. God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this win. What a wonderful story/write. Have a blessed autumn day with your win....................
Hinshaw Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Andrea, congrats for your well-deserved top lst place win! Kept me rapt to the end. Bob H
Alex Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Indeed, a great family story is connected with the trains. You have dealt with it in such a detailed and highly poetic way. Congratulations!
Norton Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 2:48 AM
Magnificent, my friend.Congratulations, on your win. Hope you get to ride a train again, just for the fun of it. Take care, Bryan
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 2:07 AM
Congratulations Andrea! I loved how your poem transitioned through the stages of time, and as a baby boomer myself, it took me on quite a sentimental journey! Thank you for submitting this wonderful poem to my contest, and again, congratulations!
Watt Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 1:22 PM
I like the biographical picture you paint of a childhood with nostalgic memories of train rides, and how childhood transitioned into adulthood even as rail travel transitioned into planes and cars. I love the line 'My life has flown by like a plane'. Well written, my friend, and overdue POTD congrats.
Tor Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations Andrea. This one is a favorite for me...
Lawless Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 4:32 AM
ALL ABOARD!!! WOW....thanks for the train ride through your life Andrea. A nostalgic trip covering the generations and gyrations of a nation....and a family
Jones Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 4:32 AM
Imaginative
Nicole Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:29 PM
When you have the chance, take a train, my dear sweet friend. This journey you have taken me on, curls softly around my heart. So beautiful and tender. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:44 PM
Charming write. Loved reading it was like riding alongside you on those trains of history in your life. Congrats on potd.
Roper Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on POTD with a great write, Andrea.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:17 PM
A wonderful write and insight into your past life Andrea. Trains have always been a fascination to me and a wonderful way to travel. Congratulations on poem of the day. All the best… Belle
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 2:46 PM
The hands down best way to travel imho. Excellent piece, particularly for contest and I love your last lines especially. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on POTD; a gorgeous write! My father LOVED trains!
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October 29, 2021 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations Andrea on potd, A very open and nostalgic recollection of your childhood experiences, from long train journey's to moon landings, all comes together for a wonderful read, cheers David
Cheney Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations! Nice to recall the memories of riding the train.
Hankins Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 10:05 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading about your early life on the rails, Andrea. What a terrific job you have done with this poem. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!!!!
Rone Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Andrea - I too was in Seattle on that rainy afternoon when the moon landing occurred. Today, the silver Coastal Starlight passes my home as I am reading your great POTD. Blowing two longs, a short and a long as it approaches the crossing to the marina, it is a train I have never ridden. Sad. No time. I loved this piece.
La France Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Andrea, I love the story of your life and of train travel, wonderful writing and congratulations on the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 7:50 AM
I like the way you've woven your family's history into a feel-good story about trains in America, their life and their 'death.' Congrats on POTD, Andrea! ~ Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful story/write. "Love It" The trains were great in there day. I like them because you can see out the big windows where you are going. Now everyone wants a plane to get there faster. Have a blessed autumn day................
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