Train Tracks

A little girl played along the railroad tracks. Walking on the rails, playing in the little station house. Waiting for her friend the engineer to blow the whistle as he came around the bend. On special days he would stop and lift her and her mother into an empty box car , then  hurry back to the engine, open the throttle, the steam would hiss and away we'd go. Ill never forget the sound of that chug-chug-chug getting faster and faster until it seemed we were flying down the track. The journey wasn't far, about 5 miles. . A short trip but an exciting one for a child who lived miles from the nearest town. We would spend the day playing in the river and picnicking on the shore. In the afternoon we'd catch the northbound and return home tired and happy. It was a simpler time, we didn’t worry about the legality of that little ride, or for that matter, the safety of riding in an open car with our feet dangling out the door.. we just lived! The train was
a big part of my life and I still get a thrill when I hear that far away whistle in the night.

                               the hiss of the steam
                 down the tracks and round the bend
                             back to my childhood

     1/8/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/1/2015 1:58:00 PM
BARBARA, CONGRATULATIONS on your RAILWAY JOURNEY win *ALWAYS* SKAT
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:06:00 AM
Nice take on the theme, congrats on the theme,
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:38:00 PM
Barbara , love your descriptive story, congratulations on your win, and 7. Blessings eve
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:01:00 PM
a great journey Barbara congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 1/8/2015 9:30:00 PM
Subtly beautiful Barbara!
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:38:00 PM
I enjoyed riding on your train today -- exciting to sit with leg dangling in the open air! Awesome.
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Date: 1/8/2015 7:53:00 PM
Wonderful! loved your story!
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Date: 1/8/2015 7:19:00 PM
We still have steam trains here on our little Island - I love the sound of the whistle - my son used to love going on the train and we would get a seasonal pass:-) happy memories - guess your memories are the same but the health and safety 'police' would have a nightmare at it these days - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/8/2015 6:58:00 PM
Never got to ride the trains but I lived a half mile away from the tracks, sounds like you had fun...I know what you mean about the whistle..still hear one every night where I live now...reminds me of home...good luck in the contest..
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Date: 1/8/2015 6:45:00 PM
Sorry, I cannot fix the format , always comes out this way..BG
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Ken Jordan
Date: 1/10/2015 2:56:00 PM
Barbara, this poem is close to my heart, I love trains. Read my story, "Old Smokey No. 9"
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