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Train of Thought

“train of thought" my morning alarm takes shape in the form of the Am trak 3: 15 whistle whistling in the distance but set on snooze now it’s the four : fifteen

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Lin Lane

Date: 9/25/2023 2:11:00 AM

I don’t need an alarm to wake at this hour. I’m always up between 3 and 4. Tick tock of my innards, a habitual clock. Crafty use of railway terms, Jeff.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/25/2023 5:05:00 AM

Reality writes itself Lin

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/25/2023 2:03:00 AM

this is quite early; this is my hour every morning, so original and enjoyable poetry, thanks a lot poet, should embark in this train of thoughts

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/25/2023 5:04:00 AM

Thanks yann. I wake when I wake...