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Pick up Hiccups

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:18:00 PM

Kash, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 10:24:00 PM

Hi, Kash. I forgot about this one!!! Good to see you are keeping up a little bit on Soup to know to enter this one. how ARE you?? Sure miss you. congrats here.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:40:00 AM

ha ha - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 3:45:00 AM

wowowow! cheers for the top win, kashi.. really cool! come visit..:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:23:00 PM

Congratuations, Kash. a deserving win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2011 12:44:00 PM

Very creative..Congrats..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 5/22/2011 9:09:00 AM

Kashinath, Great To see you at the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/22/2011 8:15:00 AM

Well done! Congratulations on your =1st placing! Regards, Robert.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/21/2011 4:44:00 PM

a cute one Kashinath . congratulations on this one. great win!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2011 10:35:00 AM

Big congrats to you, Kash, on taking first place with this witty write! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of brian, kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 9:03:00 AM

Congrats Kash on your first place win in Brian's contest with this cool entry luv.. enjoy..

James Fraser

Date: 5/21/2011 3:00:00 AM

Koolio footle Kashinath, good luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2011 6:30:00 AM

wishing u a happy weekend Kash..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2011 12:43:00 AM

Hey, this is VERY creative, Kash. those stop and go's ARE like hiccups aren't they?? Clever boy!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2011 10:10:00 PM

Kash, lol... good luck in contest,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2011 6:55:00 PM

A pick up hiccup!!! That is a fortune cookie type of write-NIce one, Kash. This was my first footle contest and I couldn't find too many out there when I did a lil research...now they are popping up everywhere---on this site of course!! Best 2 U! Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 12:47:00 PM

So cute and witty, Kash. Aren't the footles fun? Winning wishes are coming your way, dear friend. Thank you for always being there. Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 5/19/2011 12:43:00 PM

I had a dog who was afraid of the Hiccups, this poem reminds me of that. you wrote a great piece here, enjoyed reading.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 10:38:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Kashinath. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol

Rinki Nandy

Date: 5/19/2011 9:00:00 AM

Someone's done it finally, nice one on traffic. good luck with the contest Kashy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/19/2011 5:44:00 AM

super cool piece Kash and luv the hiccups.. good luck in the contest my friend.. glad u were thrilled with your win ..luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2011 4:52:00 AM

lol, good luck for the contest Kash :)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/19/2011 3:10:00 AM

Nice and funny