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This year we pooled our money to give to a needy cause. So we’re not expecting much on Christmas Day from Santa Claus. Of course the children all will find their hearts’ desires beneath the tree. They are too young to know the thrill of giving to a charity. So we’re breaking with tradition in limiting our spending spree On lavish gifts for one another. What a big change that will be. But there is one last tradition that we follow slavishly. We celebrate all family birthdays to the very nth degree. When we wake on birthday morning we know the whole day will be ours. From the youngest to the eldest, this day brings us super powers And so much love and true devotion that we’re treated like a queen Or a king as gender dictates, but you all know what I mean. From one year to over ninety, there’s a party every year. We are showered with gifts and honor from the folks we hold most dear. We will gather Christmas morning just the same as every year As we watch the children open gifts, with happiness and cheer. But we know we’ll be remembered when our birthday comes around When everyone will gather with the best gift to be found. Gifts and love and honor, enough cake to make us groan, We look forward to our birthdays with a party of our own. Written for Paula’s “Tradition” contest won 9th place

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Date: 12/20/2011 7:05:00 PM
Coongratulations on your win! I've read quite a few beautiful traditions, Joyce and your family's is one of them...it is said, "we only pass this way but once"...and we can never give or shower enough love on each other! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:28:00 PM
Glad to see this one won, JOyce. I sure love this tradition.
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Date: 12/19/2011 3:09:00 PM
Joyce congrats on your win, a very fine traditon..David
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Date: 12/19/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Traditions" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2011 4:40:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your great work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2011 2:24:00 PM
What a beautiful piece, Joyce. Many congrats to you too, my friend : )
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:34:00 AM
This is a touching write - good luck in the contest.........George
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Date: 12/2/2011 8:18:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry this morning Joyce. It has been awhile since I have been reading and commenting. So going to make it short this time with a promise to try and read more often after the holidays. Have a wonderful weekend and may it be full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:47:00 PM
What a good write here Joyce,, love the close scene it portrays..!
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:49:00 PM
This is wonderful to have that one very special day and treat the person like royalty. GREAT entry for the contest, Joyce!
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Date: 12/1/2011 3:26:00 PM
Giving can be more rewarding than receiving. It brings the giver so much happiness. Bravo for giving your money to a needy cause, Joyce. I love the birthday tradition you describe too. What a great etry for Paula's contest! Winning wishes coming your way, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2011 12:13:00 PM
Nicely done Joyce. Love the poem - love the tradition. I think by giving to charity, you are honoring Jesus' birthday for him the same way you do to others in your family on their birthday. Good luck in the contest.
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