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Say, friend, I think you're in love, just like a longing turtle dove. It feels like something from above, but is it truly so? What appears to be a jewel, might be a design to fool by one so sinister and cruel, residing down below. I'll say for you an earnest prayer, that when your soul is laid bare, you'll not find you're in despair, like a toy left in the snow.

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Date: 1/17/2025 9:59:00 PM
Ouch, my ears are burning.
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Date: 1/17/2025 12:40:00 PM
Thx David (sniff). I can use all the prayers you want to send my way
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/17/2025 12:52:00 PM
Still...
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David Crandall
Date: 1/17/2025 12:45:00 PM
Come on Tom, you're OK - :-)

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