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Let's not turn this into a free for all. I am just having fun! P L E A S E!!

TOXIC STATE hunched, amidst creative ash: H.D.’s sulphuric shell - pieces of a deranged puzzle. all the president’s men scratch their hairless heads. they had thought to build a wall - but no one in town owns a brick. 12/1/2016 Contest – Toxic State *H.D. – Humpty Dumpty

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Date: 12/25/2016 9:57:00 AM
This is very witty. Congratulations, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Kai
Date: 12/24/2016 1:08:00 PM
Many congrats on clever free verse poem Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl!
Date: 12/24/2016 11:23:00 AM
Congrats Kim to win. Love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/24/2016 9:12:00 AM
A 7 for your thought-provoking WINNING poem,Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Janice! Hugs!
Date: 12/24/2016 12:57:00 AM
Ha ha! Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Richard!
Date: 12/23/2016 2:09:00 PM
A big smile for you, Kim - you rocked and rolled!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2016 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Doug :)
Date: 12/23/2016 1:08:00 PM
That's a clever and fun one :D Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2016 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Darren :
Date: 12/2/2016 1:18:00 PM
nice satire on the times in which we live..good luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic!
Date: 12/2/2016 9:02:00 AM
Funny with a lot of truth tagging along. Really nice Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 12/2/2016 8:35:00 AM
Wow, that one is great! So inventive :) Good luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Darren!
Date: 12/1/2016 9:11:00 PM
Creativity and humourous in one! Good luck in the contest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Rick!

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