Toxic State

Sometimes my mind screams out to be aroused; begs to be satisfied. ...yet she remains subdued; chained to the limitations of this world. 11/30/2016

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 4/19/2021 3:30:00 PM

Yeah, sometimes I feel like breaking free; good poem -JT

Robert Kinard

Date: 12/5/2020 7:35:00 AM

Thee only limit you have is your Imagination.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2018 1:10:00 PM

You have no limitations FJ. ;0)

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/13/2018 6:15:00 PM

Lolol if only your words were true Rick! Thank you for lightening my spirit this evening :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2018 9:38:00 PM

Trapped -- but nothing is forever … Only if we let it. Best wishes, Gershon

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/13/2018 6:14:00 PM

Sometimes easier said than accomplished. Still, you are right GW.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/10/2018 6:20:00 AM

So very true Flo. Powerful words my dear. Excellent write...Maria hugs

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/10/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you again beautiful! ;)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2018 11:46:00 AM

That sums it up quite nicely and it's so true.

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:56:00 PM

Thanks ML :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/26/2018 3:32:00 PM

Where are you, sweet Flo. I feel this poem to my very core. You can't let toxicity get to you. I miss you. Please get back to me. Hugs and love

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:55:00 PM

I have not left Eilee. Just dealing with unexpected issues here :) Thank you for peeking in on me.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 6/25/2018 7:25:00 AM

This toxicity is sad especially the inhibitions.We have to skim off.Regards.

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:54:00 PM

Yes. Thank you Rajat.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 6/23/2018 8:12:00 AM

My Dear Flo, Yes....Limitations abound...but your ability to bulldoze them leaves me in awe and admiration!

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:54:00 PM

Chuck you are always so kind to me. Thank you so much.

White Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 12:46:00 PM

Hit the nail on the head with this one, FJ! Well done!

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:53:00 PM

Thanks WW :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/11/2018 3:08:00 PM

An amazing poetry, statement, powerful too!

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:53:00 PM

Hello my dear Harry. Thank you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/9/2018 9:59:00 PM

Good one, FJ. Congrats on your top win.

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:52:00 PM

Thanks Line :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/6/2018 9:52:00 AM

I have a feeling I might have been there, too, Flo!! Alas we can be hampered by our limitations, but that does not mean we have to give up on hopes and dreams! Congratulations on this merited podium finish! Warm regards // paul

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:52:00 PM

So true Paul. Thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2018 11:07:00 PM

Great verse, Flo, great place :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:51:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/4/2018 9:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this profound two lines.

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thanks Susan :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/4/2018 9:19:00 AM

FJ, much emotion! Congrats on your fine win! Hugs...Kim

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:49:00 PM

Hi Kim. Thank you :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/4/2018 8:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win Flo..

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2018 8:12:00 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you dear Søster :)

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 7:05:00 AM

A two line masterpiece, FJ... Many congrats on your win. Elaine

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:48:00 PM

Hello Elaine. Thank you so much.

Silent One

Date: 6/4/2018 6:20:00 AM

Well expressed FJ.. Lets hope everyone can escape from the limitations of the world..

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thank you S1.

Carl Fraser

Date: 6/3/2018 5:34:00 PM

I think we all get caught in that state now and then FJ but the gift of poetry is our constant therapist. There we have no limits. Good stuff FJ Blessings Carl

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 12:47:00 PM

Yes, very true Carl. Thank you my friend :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/1/2018 11:05:00 AM

Perfectly stated, Flo. I feel a bit stagnate myself.This should do VERY well. have a great weekend:)

FJ Thomas
Date: 6/2/2018 12:22:00 PM

Hello Daniel :) Definitely in the same boat together. Thank you Daniel!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/1/2018 8:36:00 AM

A brillant capture of what we crave and long for, our infinite aspirations and of our limited powers as human souls in front of the wonders of the Divine! At least within words and the realm of poetry we can assuage that sense and need of reaching what is beyond the limits! A pleasure to read your beauties FJ! Stay tuned and blessed.

FJ Thomas
Date: 6/2/2018 12:19:00 PM

You understand perfectly Besma. Thank you very much :)