Toxic State

Sometimes my mind screams out to be aroused; begs to be satisfied. 
...yet she remains subdued; chained to the limitations of this world.



11/30/2016

imaginationmusewritingverse

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Honestly J.T.

April 19, 2021 at 3:30 PM

Yeah, sometimes I feel like breaking free; good poem -JT

Robert Kinard

December 5, 2020 at 7:35 AM

Thee only limit you have is your Imagination.

Richard Lamoureux

July 12, 2018 at 1:10 PM

You have no limitations FJ. ;0)

FJ Thomas

July 13, 2018 at 6:15 PM

Lolol if only your words were true Rick! Thank you for lightening my spirit this evening :)

Gershon Wolf

July 10, 2018 at 9:38 PM

Trapped -- but nothing is forever … Only if we let it. Best wishes, Gershon

FJ Thomas

July 13, 2018 at 6:14 PM

Sometimes easier said than accomplished. Still, you are right GW.

Maria Williams

July 10, 2018 at 6:20 AM

So very true Flo. Powerful words my dear. Excellent write...Maria hugs

FJ Thomas

July 10, 2018 at 8:10 AM

Thank you again beautiful! ;)

M. L. Kiser

July 9, 2018 at 11:46 AM

That sums it up quite nicely and it's so true.

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:56 PM

Thanks ML :)

Eileen Manassian

June 26, 2018 at 3:32 PM

Where are you, sweet Flo. I feel this poem to my very core. You can't let toxicity get to you. I miss you. Please get back to me. Hugs and love

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:55 PM

I have not left Eilee. Just dealing with unexpected issues here :) Thank you for peeking in on me.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

June 25, 2018 at 7:25 AM

This toxicity is sad especially the inhibitions.We have to skim off.Regards.

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:54 PM

Yes. Thank you Rajat.

Chuck Melugin

June 23, 2018 at 8:12 AM

My Dear Flo, Yes....Limitations abound...but your ability to bulldoze them leaves me in awe and admiration!

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:54 PM

Chuck you are always so kind to me. Thank you so much.

White Wolf

June 19, 2018 at 12:46 PM

Hit the nail on the head with this one, FJ! Well done!

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:53 PM

Thanks WW :)

Harry Horsman

June 11, 2018 at 3:08 PM

An amazing poetry, statement, powerful too!

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:53 PM

Hello my dear Harry. Thank you.

Line Gauthier

June 9, 2018 at 9:59 PM

Good one, FJ. Congrats on your top win.

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:52 PM

Thanks Line :)

Paul Callus

June 6, 2018 at 9:52 AM

I have a feeling I might have been there, too, Flo!! Alas we can be hampered by our limitations, but that does not mean we have to give up on hopes and dreams! Congratulations on this merited podium finish! Warm regards // paul

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:52 PM

So true Paul. Thank you :)

Eve Roper

June 4, 2018 at 11:07 PM

Great verse, Flo, great place :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:51 PM

Thank you Eve.

Susan Gentry

June 4, 2018 at 9:06 PM

Congratulations on your win with this profound two lines.

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:49 PM

Thanks Susan :)

Kim Rodrigues

June 4, 2018 at 9:19 AM

FJ, much emotion! Congrats on your fine win! Hugs...Kim

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:49 PM

Hi Kim. Thank you :)

Joseph May

June 4, 2018 at 8:55 AM

Congrats on your win Flo..

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:48 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 4, 2018 at 8:12 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:48 PM

Thank you dear Søster :)

Elaine George

June 4, 2018 at 7:05 AM

A two line masterpiece, FJ... Many congrats on your win. Elaine

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:48 PM

Hello Elaine. Thank you so much.

Silent One

June 4, 2018 at 6:20 AM

Well expressed FJ.. Lets hope everyone can escape from the limitations of the world..

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:47 PM

Thank you S1.

Carl Fraser

June 3, 2018 at 5:34 PM

I think we all get caught in that state now and then FJ but the gift of poetry is our constant therapist. There we have no limits. Good stuff FJ Blessings Carl

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 12:47 PM

Yes, very true Carl. Thank you my friend :)

Daniel Turner

June 1, 2018 at 11:05 AM

Perfectly stated, Flo. I feel a bit stagnate myself.This should do VERY well. have a great weekend:)

FJ Thomas

June 2, 2018 at 12:22 PM

Hello Daniel :) Definitely in the same boat together. Thank you Daniel!

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 1, 2018 at 8:36 AM

A brillant capture of what we crave and long for, our infinite aspirations and of our limited powers as human souls in front of the wonders of the Divine! At least within words and the realm of poetry we can assuage that sense and need of reaching what is beyond the limits! A pleasure to read your beauties FJ! Stay tuned and blessed.

FJ Thomas

June 2, 2018 at 12:19 PM

You understand perfectly Besma. Thank you very much :)

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