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Towers of Mystery

TOWERS OF MYSTERY ‘ ‘ ‘ ‘ ‘ Floundering, bit by bit, clawing my way to wisdom of ages, The sands burn delicate membranes of my bones I can go no further, maybe I will waste to die here... Diving, way below past equinox of rolling ocean divide , I feel no weight of flesh, the abyss releases her grip. What is this place? A vast city, towers of myth’s silvery metal, Yet I can see nothing but ocean from the height of every wall, Can this be what I have sought in the fables of Atlantis? Through my weakened eyes, armies gather in golden armor, Meeting a horde of beings creeping from the very sea! What could this be? The crunch of their amphibian feet upon alabaster sands, Filling the water bed with stench of decomposing debris Emitting forth these creatures’ smell from her deepest bowels? The air is violent, spitting with arrows, thick with screams, The noble Atlantics are fighting for their very lives! Can I be part of this? The arrows and blast of sun- crystals pass right through me, I feel nothing, damned by observing the fall of humanoids. The crystal cannons of Atlantis' towers cannot hold them, Leaving me to chill in an open ocean of mystery As waters swallow a frontier once glorified by legend's magic... Tell me, am I dead? © ------------------------ Carolyn Devonshire: Unsolved Mysteries Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/22/2011 9:15:00 AM
Nette, well written mystery piece, Congratulations on your accomplished victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2011 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Unsolved Mysteries" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:05:00 PM
a haunting and exciting write Nette. Very well done spellbinding. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on another superb win with this ultra intense story in poetry luv.. enjoy another crown my friend..luv...
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:57:00 PM
Magical, mystical, thoughts do flow, more in time what has been in the earth, perhaps it a memory time long past , when you of other times graced before your birth. great win babe, xo, Don
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:04:00 PM
A personal slant on a great mystery. Way to go nette. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:32:00 PM
GREAT atmosphere in this one, Nette. Amphibians? Were those important in the Atlantis story? I've always been fascinated by Atlantis. Congrats on your win with this dazzling piece.
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:58:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carolyn, nette
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:11:00 PM
Nette, it is said that from the coast of Ireland on misty days one can see the remnants of Atlantis in the distance. Great write on one of my favorite subjects. Congratulations on your win in the mystery contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2011 3:13:00 PM
Best wishes Nette for a win, you made my screen come alive with this..
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:02:00 AM
Hey Nette..a captivating write here...enjoyed very much...best wishes.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:22:00 AM
what a magnificent marvelous write Nette luv ..excellent mystery surrounds this piece.. poignant questions between verses.. will be at top of list in winner circle sweetie..good luck...oh wow..
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:19:00 AM
What an amazing take on the contest... Bravo my Poetic friend... always a pure joy to read your work.... love and Hugs Michael
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:31:00 AM
Excellent write. admire the poetry in it.
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:03:00 PM
Very well done. Truly a mystery.What an imagination..Great writing.
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:52:00 PM
What an imagination you have dear Nette, You take us to places no human has ever been and entertain wildly. Wonderful verse!
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