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Tour of Duty

I lie in this bed, That resembles a coffin. Hearing sounds from the, Box on the stand. Glancing down at this mangled body, Thinking I've given everything, That was asked of me. Yet, many gave the ultimate sacrifice, They were the lucky ones. I remember those days of yesteryear. I remember my brother's and sisters, No longer here as I see them, Dying in my arms. I pay tribute to the fallen, As I continue to have nightmares at night. I see a shadow come thru my door. A smile I haven't seen for years. More shadows, more faces and more smiles. He tells me, "Come on Sarge, It's time to go home." I get up out of bed disappearing, As if we were never there. I hear the slight humming, Of the Alarm in the distant. Yet, all I see are my brothers and sisters, At the end of the tunnel, Waiting for me. I hear, " Sarge, your Tour Of Duty is over. Were going home."

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Date: 6/12/2023 12:05:00 PM
Hello Shirley, a question. Was that a dream? Or a nightmare? That dream must have real to you. Friendship & Love, /Darlene\
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 6/14/2023 2:37:00 PM
Darlene you are so sweet but I don't have PTSD but I do have nightmares of my bros and sis who died while I was in the army. The one that haunts me I was behind the truck in convoy as it rolled killing a 18 year old pvt. 2 or 3 deaths that were senseless. All of us thinking what could we have done??
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2023 11:13:00 AM
Hello Shirley, yes this sounds eerie telling me of your neiighbour's death. Id there meds for PTSD? If so do they take away the nightmares? I am just asking. My younger nephew has PD the middle nephew has ADD. The oldest nephew is okay. Love & Frienbdship/Darlene\
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 6/13/2023 4:19:00 PM
Isee what you mean about the nightmares. Some men and women in their military career have traumatic things that happen to them and they do have PTSD and they have the nightmares that's why I said that the lucky ones are the ones that died because they will never have to live through that. I've had friends die so I hope when my time comes they will be there to greet me. Always love and friendship. This sounds really eerie but at 5am on the 12 June 6 hrs after posting this, my neighbor a vet died in his sleep.
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 6/13/2023 4:12:00 PM
Hey Darlene, well we were all sitting around and talking about ghosts, paranormal then it led to passing and who we wanted to come guide us. 60% incl myself said Bros & sist we served with. We were closer than family, so it's a tribute.

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