Tough Or Fluff

Knew a kid who thought he was tough,
Just a bully doing mean stuff.
One day after falling
He then started bawling,
We found he was nothing but fluff.  

By: Greg Stanley
Entry into Carol’s “Fluff” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 12, 2012 at 2:27 AM
GREG,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Very clever. Congrats on your win
Brown Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Greg. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 8:10 AM
congrats Greg on an excellent win for this awesome fluff luv..
Williams Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 2:01 AM
Greg congrats on your win, like this a lot..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:40 AM
Like it a worthy win congratulations Greg xx
Taylor Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Congrats, Greg. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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February 9, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on your win Greg, love Elizabeth
A   Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 9:01 PM
GREG, A very nice and funny... limerick... enjoyed...pd
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:07 PM
I LOVE this one. It's a really well done limerick on the topic of fluff. Hope it scores high!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:40 PM
cool write Greg .. micely penned rhyme scheme.. good luck in the contest.. this one works so well for today luv..
Sentes Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 7:00 PM
I agree with Barbara! This must win! =) Congrats in advance, mate!
Gorelick Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 6:22 PM
This has got to be on the winners list. Good going. BG
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Thank you for your support of my (FLUFF) contest Greg. Love, Carol
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